content filled with pedophilia and grooming, don't read it unless you want to risk jail time.
The writing is quit good. Story development so far is slower than a turtle.Since the development is so slow we dont know that much about the mc, but he used his phone, which is supposed to be his cheat according to the synopsis, 1 time in the first 18 years. That brings some questions for me...The updates are a joke since it is only in the trial phase.The world setting is ok I guess, though I'm still confused how some things work. The biggest minus is the really slow passed writing so far. I hope it picks up some momentum.
Can u add more chapters pz,,, the story is good and am hooked at it,,, plz finish it ........................... ..........
It seems pretty good so far! It is the Indian version of I'm Really A SuperStar! The culture is a little different but the humor is pretty good! Thank you for your hard work and can't wait for the rest!
I think this novel is a hidden gem and i hope this novel can be regular.. if you read first ten chapter you will know this novel have a unique plot than others novel out there. Highly recommended..
Book starts great but the word choices later on leave me disappointed. Like at the start I would give it a straight 5. Sadly later the writing changes as if the author was swapped from an adult to a teenager. It constantly is “this dude”, “that dude” as if a teenager wrote it. I think the word ”dude” is the most used word in this novel and it gets old very fast. Then you have people say things like “how did you know our mighty and scary name”. Or ”this is a really scary dude”.
Nice novel story...Nice plot story....Unique character...ope can update more chapter each weeks....:D :D.
great story and read i would recommend it I am not a fan of that whole thing with Travis also if you read this I think it would be cool if you did a book on Travis without the heros coming in the picture
Can't believe this was put on break just after the trial read, this is the second novel I've seen this happen to that I've had my eye on, might as well just delete it
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Not a terrible concept, but your grammar leaves much to be desired. Consider taking a few days off to edit your entire story. Also consider creating a table of contents and/or an addendum of power levels.