It is great, the pace is kinda slow but well it has a slice-of-life tag, so I guess it is okay. More lemons in the future, please...
i love the translation work...story is pretty unique !!!
Another Faloo Novel that's all and most of the time they are only 25% the same as the raws lol
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The concept is cool but the story is slow and there’s a lot of long boring explanations which are sometime repeated to increase word count… otherwise it could become a fun story
Impressive and very imaginative. ✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌?? The concept of the plot is amazing. Looking forward more to it.???????????
Interesting Love your work Recommendable Keep up the good work Author
story is a 6 year old that has been betrayed by family, can't feel anything and expects people to treat him like an adult or he threatens them (with no capability). so a worthless child that insists that he is an adult.
You did really great author...?? There is only two chapters but I am hooked with a story...Your writing style is really great....?? Yes your hardwork is shown in two chapters only...Hope to read more chapters in future...keep up the good work ?
am not really into video games novel but damn this is a good one to read. am just a bit dizzy with the compacted paragraphs that looks so scary on my phone but who cares.. i will add this to my novels that I will binge read soon..great job author!
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!Io started it thinking it was just another virtual reality thing without any sort of appeal, but it turns out it's a totally different story with unusual development and great, great - did I say great?- writing and good character design.The world building starts and develop relatively slowly but you will almost never want to skip a paragraph, so I can't say it's really slow (unless you don't like the few '****-romance' dialogue between protagonist and girlfriend, which, however, I think are extraordinary well written for a novel)Tu sum it all up, awesome! Keep up the good work, author!