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I have read the latest chapter and to be honest, I don't understand at all.
MC is nothing special and none of the characters are well described, events happen randomly and MC gets random buffs from the gods.
I hope the novel will be better in the future.
Great job author-san! I have been reading and I just can't get enough I have a feeling it will turn darker and my my, what obsession do I have with darkness, This book is going straight to my reading list.
A must read
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It's actually somewhat interesting
I like the way that the story is progressing and I believe that it is going to be really good
Also the thing Tha I like is the character design a lot and I hope it will continue being that way
At first i wanted to know if Mr.lo*** was a character the protagonist created and as i read i got fascinated about the whole chemistry between The Cart***nist and the cart**n he has written about . The realistic connection between them is something admirable. The plot is well thought out and the picture created is undeniably beautiful. A great read.
Its great give us more we love it.
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I read the novel before it got completely revamped. Chapters got rewritten, and it definitely improved the overall writing quality of the book. Although he doesn't have an extensive vocabulary, the story is still good and I do like it. The releases weren't constant, but they were there. I love how the novel is going right now so my review is a bit biased, but I have hopes for the novel as It grows and exceeds 100 chapters.
I love the way the story developed the character design, it flows naturally and it's addictive if you are a fan of fantasy novels
Overall nice story. But the MC is too weak despite all the advantage she has
145 Chapters 290.4K Views yet 5 reviews... Definitely legit
What you need to know before reading: - The protagonist is not super OP, reincarnated with SSS+ talent, he doesn't have a super strong system, he doesn't find a divine artifact that improves his body, he won't be the strongest in the kingdom in chapter 100... The protagonist reincarnates in a body with low talent for magic but, with his superior knowledge of the past life, he will surpass all others. - Because of the above, the pace of the story is a little slow, and that's fine with me. The protagonist's strength building is more realistic. He will also learn new things, after all he now has the theory and practice of magic. - The protagonist's personality is a bit arrogant... ...ok, fine! he is arrogant. But as the chapters go by, this characteristic diminishes and stays at a good level. After all, he reached the top of magical theories in his past life without having magic! So it's normal for him to be a little arrogant, isn't it? - From what I read, I believe that the protagonist is not a good guy and not a bad guy. I think he is aligned with the "neutral". If he has to kill, he will kill, but he's not a psychopath. - At the beginning of the work, the author is a little lacking in the physical descriptions of the characters, making it difficult and even impossible to visualize them mentally. His mother's mental image is a woman with big balloons where she suffocates the mc. Later the author improves in this area, so rest assured. - The protagonist will not be a lone wolf. He will have allies. Stay calm! They will not be burdens. - The writing is good. It is still necessary to know more things about the world... Cultures, regions, religions if they exist... I don't know if there are other races like elves, dwarves, etc, but it's at the beginning of the work so that's for later.- There are some "Slice of Life" parts in the story that are nice and funny. They help you relax a little and not overwhelm readers with information at all times. hmmm I think that's it for now. This review was based up to chapter 150. Keep up the good work, author. ^^
Am I the only one who is bothered by the author suddenly turning Maid Lotus into a whore on a whim in half a chapter??(around chapter 100)
I mean.. You dont do that after building up a character that much
