The start has many info for my small brain to process but I get the hang of it later on. ? Nice nice nice.....And your grammar was okay. The plot was hooking and the narration was smooth and fluent. Nice it going and I enjoyed the reading experience that you gave. Kudos and Peace ✌️
Shameless five starsI rewrote my review because I wanted clearer one for my novel...I first thought of this novel's idea 7 months ago and I was planning to release it after I finish writing my first novel, but here I am! I decided to join Fantasy Contest with this one!When I planned to finally create it, I wanted something different, something we don't see a lot in novels, something VERY unique! And this is how I came up with "Realms within Us"! This novel is unique in its own way, with the weird and mysterious events, actions and other stuff that are left in the shadows until the right time comes!And we mustn't forget the characters with a lot within them and the things that happen to them and will happen too!!I love this novel because I filled it with everything I wanted in a game and action novel, life lessons and things we should remember (I'm talking about history classes guys haha)I did change some stuff but trust me those changes have meanings and will be known in future chapters!Sorry for the long review!!! But I was so excited to explain few things!I'm thankful to all those who added my novel to their library and I'll be more when you vote for me!Also, your opinions and thoughts matter so much for me, it helps me to know how you guys feel about some stuff in every chapter or about the novel in general so please do let me know how you feel about it. And I'm someone who LOVES to interact with my readers, so please do not hesitate! Thank you so much again for choosing my novel and I hope you'll keep supporting it 'till this pretty long journey ends!!
Ahahaha I read it as a fatherless child not fateless lol==================================*^^^^^**^^*^*^^*^^*^^*^^^*^^**^^**^^^**^^**^^**^**^^**^
If you have read Dark Blood Age it is pretty similar but the mc is ruthless and have a pretty powerful cheat with the former one did not have and the mc behaves like any normal human being would in the situation and does not act like the saint/hero and the MC mentions himself that he does not want to be a saint and I love it , if you enjoy the mc being himself you will love it too but if you the mc to a saint DON'T READ
Average but Ok Noveljust read this by lowering your IQ...............................................................................
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!It would be great if he became a billionaire and create your own virtual reality games companies and become the most powerful person in the world and at the same time level up with a good background story and a harem of beauties.
Superb novel, but only has ~80 supporters. Novels like these ones which have a well built out plot and world background hardly get chosen though - seemingly because it’s only harem or aggro-mc novels that get picked from trial read.Have seen so many genuinely good novels end up untranslated because of this.
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In early Chapters He transmigate and become lazy and had no motivation to become strong and his mother die because of stupidity they kneel to enemies because they can't handle and what did her trying to stop an enemy because of child she did not know?? how can he prioritize other safety over her family hahhhh tooo fooorcedd just for an called character development! !!
If you were trying to read The Lord’s Empire and felt it lacking, this is the story for you since this is basically what it was inspired by, if I recall properly. The skill development, cultivation, npcs, allies, villains, every aspect of the game system are ALL better. I read this one first, so I couldn’t stomach The Lord’s Empire hand-wavey way of doing things. This is a good MC that works for his advantages and plans ahead. He’s smart, hard-working, and puts in a lot of effort to be a loyal friend. He’s also not fake humble or even pretending to be magnanimous, while actually being black-bellied. He’s a good person who just wants to build the best future possible for his family at all costs. It’s also nice that not every woman is placed in the novel to chase after him and stroke his ego by being face slapped. Everyone is pretty reasonable in comparison to most novels like this. You can understand why people are the way they are. The only person that might be annoying in the whole novel is the sister, and that’s just because she’s a Mary Sue, but she also 8, so whatever, I guess. She’s not in every chapter so it’s tolerable! I only got to around chapter 357 ish? Before I paused. I think I burnt myself out a little bit? The story is more technical than some other stories and is really focused on territory stuff, and sometimes that just isn’t what I’m in the mood for. HOWEVER, that doesn’t make it a not good novel. It is amazing at everything it sets out to do. TLDR: it’s great! And has very few plot holes in the novel minus when it comes to the Mary Sue sister. 10/10 great MC, great cast, great rivals, great system! If you have any questions or need something explained feel free to ask! I really enjoy the story and it being here makes mobile reading much easier than GT because of the ad glitches.
An enjoyable story to read, differs quite a lot from most, and is so far only centered around a small barbarian village, but it’s interesting and catchy. The concept isn’t anything new, but it’s done well.I hope this get picked, cause while it isn’t LoTM tier, it’s a story that I will probably keep reading and won’t drop.
This was a great book that I started to read and finished in one breath. I stirgnly recommend to read and advice writer to type without holding back.