I like the story even if there are some spelling mistakes, it doesn’t affect the immersion. MC is cool btw ?
good novel..............................
very good start, I'm curious to see how this story progresses
Wow! It's a well crafted painful read. the FL starting point gave me nightmares. This is a good story.
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
So i finally finished reading all the chapters released so far (chapter 61), and i can with confidence that this novel is a hidden gem. The story is really original in a way that ignores the cliches we are so used to, and instead presents us with a concrete plot and rational MC.About the story: We have a soul tormented by its past decisions, and fuelled by a sense of purpose and revenge that is presented in a way that is natural and makes us understand why the MC does what he does. Make no mistake this is an evil MC. Although his actions are explained together with his troubled circunstances and we can sympathize and even understand his choices, he by no means has limits to achieving his goals and will crush anyone who stand in his way, enemy or not.The lore of the story is not tha unique in a sense that we have the common fantasy world and gods with a system. What is different however is that the system is not so clear to its inhabitants, whom only have a superficial understanding about it, and not the full detailed information. For example, you would know your class, level, and skills, but not your specific stats or how the skill calculates damage.Its relevant as well to say that the story picks up the pace as you read. At start, not all is explained, but as you go you will be told about the world, the gods, the MC himself and his past.About the Updates: The releases are somewhat too little and too sparse for now, but the author has promised too pick up the pace as more interest is shown on his novel.All in all this is a really good novel that can be amazing if done right. I would definetely recommend you give it a try because if you stick around you will definetely enjoy it.
A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
The words used to describe the world and the events that take in place in it are wonderful and filled with so much fantastical whim. I really liked how much time you used to describe the city of festivities, however, I did find that many of the things that used to describe are repeated several times but are just phrased differently and could do with a trim of the excess.
well didn't read it and i wont cause of the wimpy beginner Japanese type guy.. to me being weak doesn't mean you have to be a wimpy or annoying type of MC. Most MC always start weak anyway.
I have been reading this story for a while now. I am really surprised to see the writing mature here. As the story progressed the Writing quality and the overall story telling kept on getting better. Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming.
Honestly, this novel is quite enjoyable and has a lot of potential........................................................................................
Jolie histoire, je ne sais pas pour les autres moi j’aime bien le fait tu n‘es pas rentré directement dans le vif du sujet, j’aime bien prendre mon temps de comprendre et de voir où l’on va. J’écris en français parce que j’ai constaté que le français est votre langue maternelle. Et oui il y a certaines erreurs et fautes de frappes mais cela ne rend pas médiocre ton travail pour autant. Continue et je constate que tu t’améliores aussi au fur et à mesure. El Howie les jumeaux sont exceptionnels et il y a leur ami la que j’aime bien mais le nom m’a échappé. Celui qui parle beaucoup et qui se fout pas mal de qui sont ses amis. Bonne chance