Just discovered this series. I'm really liking the story so far. Please keep up the great work! It's a nice breath of fresh air in a field filled with typical fantasy stories.
A very impressive work with good characters and story and a proper power systemMc is op and a steady character with quirks while are other characters also unique main focus so far have been slice of life and questionable romance so far 3 romantic interests.. and some Sci fi aspects explored.slow burncan be read without having to complain or cringe
The story has a lot of depth into this world that was created and I hope you'll keep making more amazing chapters in the future. Even with some of the writing mistakes, the story is very intriguing and I would recommend more people to read it.
TL;DR: This novel is like having a steak dinner after only eating hamburger helper for months. First off, the writing itself is on point. Just talking about grammar, punctuation, and spelling, it reads like someone actually proofread the chapters, and there aren't noticeable errors that distract from reading! Many available webnovels seem to suffer from a lack of proofreading, but this one doesn't. Even if this author doesn't actually proofread.In addition, the author's voice and varied vocabulary ensure good sentence variety and proper flow in each chapter all the way to the end, upon which one realizes they've read a lot, but still want to keep going. Once again, good flow is often hard to find in webnovels, so this one is a breath of fresh air. Or rather, a bite of sirloin steak.Plus, the characters have tangible character development--the big brain imp from the first 100 chapters is very different than the one now. Not just in power and figure, but also in what he values and how he reacts to events now.Ok I'm tired of writing now--it's a good book, story good, characters good, author good, I def dont regret spending 3 days reading all the way through. Though my wallet hurts a bit, I'd do it again.
Me:when will the tournament begin
As I came up to the Police Department my breath quickened and large puffs of icy air glided into my face. The Department was a grey looking building with a large oak tree at the right of the entrance. Dark green ferns curled themselves around the electric fence and the silent night suddenly seemed big, vast and eerie. Two steps I told myself, just two more steps.
'That's it, you son of a bitch. Do it!'
Rude girls ( I want more)
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
Leto was a bit skeptical about this, but he still nodded.
"'Yung pangalawa palang yata ang kasal, kasi ang panganay complicated. Nakaanak sa ibang babae. Ang ganda pa naman ng long-time girlfriend noon," Nicky spilled like a bomb.