The MC hasn't made any idiotic mistakes, the plot flows smoothly, and the side characters are pretty interesting (especially the gamers). I think this story has potential. ?
Unless you want to read a story full of loopholes with no basic concept and A author that doesn't give a s*** about details and just shove the story up your face which half of it doesn't make sense this is not the story for you I can go on and say all about the stupidity of the design of the game backgrounds the stupid ass quests that makes s*** for sense all the events that happened around the character the leveling system the quest rewards in the crazy s*** that happens around the protagonist when he is level one are you ****ing me this story has been nothing but a waste of my time and yours if you're interested in reading it this is my advice for you take it or leave it (you have been warned)
Wow! I love the plot and the world building. The grammar could use a little work, but the story itself is engaging. Roan looks like a very interesting character, with plenty of room for development. Nice work!
while not breaking away from any of the tropes, it is light hearted enjoying read, and it isn't wish fulfillment as I can see. none of the characters including the main one have stood out in any way, but there is promise for the main character to let down his walls as he gets stronger and turn into a very dynamic character. He's calculating, but also seems to rush into things, but I'd like to see him interacting longer than 1 or 2 conversations, a talking pet, npc companion or another player would be a great course of action.
Spoiler Alert:Chap 137-138Gets an item from the game to turn invisible. Save a neighbor girl from 2 armed assassins.That same day, author wrote love this and love that then they sealed the deal in bed.Wow.Anyways, a major turn down for me. Decided to quit reading it. Not much development, just a guy fast lvling usng cheat monsters.The author mish mashed the contents trying to make it emotional, mysterious and funny but failed. It's too fast paced for its own good it cant maintain a good storyline.No parents.Sick sister.In debt.A broken gaming helmet.An op ingame cheat.Easy money. Millions to Billions. Beats the military and other secret organizations in the missions of the game.Writer under estimates the military too much.They can check your bank accts. especially that you made millions of money and that you are not yet a bonafide citizen of a high end energy city. You're from the slums.It was good at first, can tolerate it. But the addition of secret police/military/organization in a somewhat light hearted storyline, gehhhh.the additional of very fast romance is gehhhhh.the addition of making virtual iyems real is gehhh..this is considering the fact that the vmmorpg is not yet fully developed to the point that it's passable as a game that adheres to 100% reality.gehhjj...I'd say a letdown after the first 100 chapters. it has potential but mehh.
Extreme low quality translation. I don't know if it is an editing mistake but the MC is a narcissist who only cares about flaunting his looks.
It is getting worse by the day. Earlier I used to love this novel.
I had a nicely criticizing review before you deleted it. Censorship at its finest. I seriously dont know why you even bother, if it’s to save “face” or whatever, doesn’t this make it worse? I’ve lost almost all respect I once had for you because of this cr*p your pulling. It’s like you want us to resent you Webnovels. If a novel is bad, let us say it is bad, and if a novel is good, let us say it is good. Why do you need to rig the reviews?
This is very good novel, the MC is so funny and smart, hes scroundel in a good way. His teachers is also funny, they r weak yet strong. Here the MC always make my mind blown and the elemeny also cultivation is unique which will not exist somewhere else, I really like this novel alot.
Can anyone tell me the reason why a lot of people like the story ?, The story is really not that great just average.??? ("??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????")
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The character of the MC is shown clearly in the first few chapters of the story, but before the cliche of the cool and emotionless guy in a high school gets old, the plot starts and the gods sh*t on everything.The premise of the story in attractive: a world abandoned by the gods, leaving the humans to face ragnarok alone. Sounds bleak. This reader hopes that if humanity prevails there should be some kind of reward, like the one who stopped it becoming the One True God and not letting all the others back in because of their cowardice, the assh*les. The action is fast-paced, the MC is a wank fantasy, there are monsters everywhere. What is not to like? The grammar is fine, and writing style can come with experience.The story has potential and is stepping along nicely. I hope it lives up to the excellent beginning.Keep up the good work, author!