I really enjoy this novel so far. It has very interesting system mechanics that I hope will be the focus.Character detail and progression is a bit lacking and the world building still needs a bit of a touch up but we're only on Chapter 32 so plenty of time.Well done author on a novel that can become great!
Interesting story and do your best to improve grammar, if this is first time writing basically always poor at grammar but it can be improved and make sure the plot getting interesting for next
Extremely good so far, the story starts off quick and the good juicy details arrive fast, only 4 chapters in and all I can say is "wonderful" I hope this becomes big so that more people can enjoy it. P.S. - As expected from such a great author...
Looking for notes in the last chapters and...Hello? Author? Are you alive?It's been like a month and so ,_,Are you okay? Say something ;^;
Its great and nice novel to past some times and great background and a unique character but why is that updates take long ... So I'm waiting on the new updates overall it is a nice novel
Might be readable for some but not for me.Here is an example of a situation of the novel. Our MC goes to sleep like a baby after jerk**g off watching his stats and he does that right beside 4 people that he doesn't trust in the least. One of them that he seriously beat and the others that he treat as cowardly ants.Why did he do that? Well the truth is that he didn't think about it even a little. As our dumb arrogant MC said earlier, he is invincible if he has a little strength. What can others do?
Everything is in order. Updating stability is also good. In short, Amazing!
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5 star for u now give me more updates...............................................................YDysfzufxfuxgjgjgjxjfhffjxzfhydzzfhzfxjggcjgcjhfxfhxfhxfhfjfjxgcgjgxj.. .....
Has gold comedic mc and sub plot. Yandere lovers must read it..............................................................................
Hope this gets chosen
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