natha3
good storu
just started reading and I'm loving every part of it...
Good story about the mafia world. Looking forward to the next book
Just started and I'm already hooked.
Love the book! Hoping for an update soon
Shifting to lion against rain queen like seriously ??????
Author, you only have 3 stories and all are ongoing, can you please build your brand by completing this story so persons can gain confidence in the quality of your work.
the blurb needs more context if you want to attract more readers. another paragraph would do if you want to keep it mysterious.
the narration has a melancholic tone to it.
tense consistency is an issue, as well as the grammar. but with some editing, this will be even better. nice work
good even thou wording is sometimes confusing
\\"wife\\" is a heartwarming and captivating book that takes readers on a thrilling adventure. With its engaging storyline, well-developed characters, and unexpected twists, it keeps you hooked from start to finish.
The story is good; Chapters repeat a lot from previous one. Grammar is really bad. Was supposed to be a "free" book....until it wasn't. I really don't understand the app, I suppose. Not good enough of a read to have to pay for it.
When will the next update be?
