Can't ask for more~Or can I?(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
What kind of father hating his newborn daughter wtf
Nice nice j enicenjcjeni nice cocooning nice. Nice I. Riven
Honestly, I prefer this version where they give the protagonist a name more consistent with their selection and not the RAW where for some strange reason the author tries to force the Chinese thing by giving the MC a name that has nothing to do That's why I hate these Chinese novels where our world is involved, that stupid nationalism is annoying
So far im really enjoying this novel. the grammar isnt bad and though some earlier chapters may need some editing, i believe over all, its not bad.The beginning was a bit rushed but if you over look that the slower pace the novel has after the first few chapters is really nice. The characters arent perfect and they seem pretty human to me. We still havent seen too much developement with danny and ivan but im sure itll come. it is quite early into the novel after all. The powers are interesting, and its nice to see them not too overpowered right from the beginning. Johnathan may have a very op ability but its good that he has restrictions on it. Over all, for where it is right now, I believe it deserves 5 stars. however that might change later on so thats when ill do a follow up review.
tbh I didn't expected anything much from the summary but when I started to read it, i was genuinely surprised by how good this was. The Comedy is on point as well as the Simple yet complex characters not to mention it have the best character relationship and parallel I have ever seen in a while (talking about Riley and Scarlet mage). everyone should atleast give this a 1 chance.l
I love it it is pretty good (better than most novels on this website)
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Munya is the true munya-nist aka protagonist of a munya cultivator aka villain cultivator munya munya munya munya munya munya munya munya munya
la premisa de la historia va bien pero hay varias cosas por mejorar:- la escritura no es muy buena, se entiende la idea pero la lectura no es fluida en general algunas cosas ni sentido tienen, en fin si pudiera mejorar la escritura ayudaría a la comprensión y mejoraría mucho la calidad de la historia-el sistema esta mu op, esto no es malo pero si el autor no controla un poco esto puede que la historia se arruine luego, es algo que suele pasar siempre que la trampa o poder es muy op, porque todo se vuelve demasiado fácil, termina siendo un cumplimiento de deseos, a menos que de eso sea la historia?dejando de lado esos 2 problemas la historia se ve buena aunque por el momento hay pocos caps entonces aun no hay una opinión clara
I don't have much to say except that it's pretty interesting imo. Those who liked reading The Author's Pov probably would probably like this a lot as well.
AUTHOR WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED IN 5months?! AtlEast out in the bio that you dropped it or something- ik there are a lot if negatuge reviews and frankly idc if u make alt accounts. JUST KEEP ON WRITING.