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I'm not gonna lie, this is a good story! I like the 1st person POV, because i wrote story using that too. I'm amazed the way you describe the MC feeling. I'm going to read it again..
love the book and couples characters with their fushion
How many chapters can be expected? Hopefully it doesn't stretch unnecessarily. One thing I like add that, so far this book is not that typical purely written where fl can't come to end with her feelings and emotions about ml. Rather she has a clear picture and stands her ground, as she should. But if author is planning to bring them both together then ml needs good lesson. There is now way he can get back fl which he doesn't deserve. Until and unless he goes to 200% redemption. Let's be clear here he treated her like trash for 5 years. He has not even twisted but cheap mindset while wearing polish attire. Like for him his problem, opinion everything matters but fl existence was not worth bet an eye on. Author take time while writing no problem. But till the time he doesn't realise all the deeds he had done, what did he cause, the consequences, the pain fl felt everything, evrything should and must come back to him. We r talking about second chance love and that comes with cost and karma. SO AUTHOR PLEASE DON'T TURN THIS WORK LIKE THOSE LOW IQ ML AND LOW ESTEEM FL BOOK. I thought this would be like that but as I read. I'm glad I was wrong so far. (129 ch in). AUTHOR GREAT WORK.
I have found a new love. I goan indulge myself.
Great light reading. Good job ?? Hope to see more of your work
really good story waiting for more^_^ *_*
There is a lot of potential here but it lacks direction and execution. Lots of filler and inane conversations that is like listening to my parents “be amusing.” Sadly I bought the remaining chapters just before it got silly.
It really a fun read, juts minor spelling mistakes which can be easily ignored, overall it's great read to improve mood and make you ? ? ?
I like a competent FL who doesn't feel like a burden
This is some top quality stuff right there! Especially for a Chinese written sports fic about the NBA, by far the most entertaining one of its kind. Love the MC, the characters are depicted decently (as much as possible at least), the pacing is nice and dynamic and the story progression feels real (you got your ups and downs). Ps: For any die-hard LeBron fans, be warned, this one will be a tough read for ya?
Loved this I’m obsessed!! 100/10 could not put down