Why choose this novel?? The author is going hiatusAnd the update is absolutely unstableAnd why i give 5* ? It's supposed to be 3 starsThe adventures are boring, the setting is similar to Monster Paradise and Super God GeneBtw before you Sun of The Beach said i give review before i read, let me tell you, i always read the free trial on original web before voting
Wow, one of the better novels in all of WN most recent picks. It's a 'Transmigrated with a System' story but the focus on the system is very minor, so far I think there's been less than 200 words regarding the system. The type of system is also one that's entirely hands off, allowing the MC to actually have a life and further the plot without referring to it every three paragraphs. As for the MC, we finally get an intelligent, down to earth character that actually thinks before he acts rather than arrogantly throwing his ill-gotten power around and stomping on everyone. The MC plays the part of a wastrel third son of the powerful prime minister but does it in such a way that the readers dont just hate his guts and want to punch him in the face. As for the side characters, they actually show some depth and ambiguity. His father is intelligent, highly capable and kind hearted, but he purposefully fosters an image as a cold hearted and greedy official so as to not threaten the emperor and bring trouble on his clan. So much different than those of similar stories that will already be planning rebellion within the first 5 chapters rather than just moderating their actions.The Emperor is appropriately mysterious, being more than the arrogant, almighty figure we see in these novels. Even 39 chapters in I still cant say how much he knows, or how he really feels towards the MC and his dad.The female lead isnt the Mary Sue type I was expecting either. Yes she's a talented Martial artist and a competent general despite her young age, but those can all be expected given that her father is a great general and raised her in that manner. Despite this, she also shows some flaws and a believable lack of competence when she tries to deal with the city guard the same way as with soldiers on the battlefield. Also rather than the author dancing around the issue and having both her and the MC be ignorant of the others feelings, they both quickly realize that neither want to marry the other and actually talk things out before agreeing to somewhat work together on the matter.All in all, these first 39 chapters have been beyond excellent and I hope it keeps that way after the story is picked up.
Where are you Daoist RaLegacy? It was thanks to this forbidden text that I was able to enlighten my spear to peak virility! If only the text had been complete, then my secret move "profound thrusts" would have been one with the Dao... Anyway, Daoist brother I hope you are living well and you are not under the pressure of life's tribulations.I like the story. Still do... #Updatemore
Bad..... the tag says faceslapping and feel good...... but I didn't feel good after reading this..... BS novel..... MC is a beta..... he says no one would care if he wears good clothes and branded items because they all think he is poor what a load of BS....... Appearance is what makes a person ....... you dress like a delivery boy ....... then you need to get ready to be treated like one..... Brainless beta MC..... doesn't use his money for useful things...... just wastes it..... doesn't use his power to prove himself ..... fkin masochist....
Honestly, I’ve been struggling to find a novel that has less than 100 chapters written to hold my interests. This novel is definitely able to do just that. I definitely recommend you give it a try! The word count per release is pretty decent unlike some novels on the top charts *cough* it shouldn’t take me two minutes to read a chapter (how are you supposed to make it into a book?!) *cough* Anyways I digress. It’s an overall well written novel that will suck you in. We’ve yet to see much of the system so that’s still up in there air but I’m expecting great things! Keep up the great work author and don’t skimp on that word count ;)
The translation is wack, and frequently disturbs my reading experience. On top of that things just work out for the MC, lastly that romance was super forced...Overall: Waste of Time
Very rarely do you find a xianxia without a detestable MC. This story has revenge theme, weak to stronger, mystery and possibly romance. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i never thought of writing a review here nor did give one beforebut this novel deserves one.first of all the novel is amazing it refreshing to read. it's not like other novel where the MC would get skills and be super strong, here it's a bit different it's neither a OP one nor a sloppy one, it's the best for that situation. And the other thing i liked in this novel was romance even tho it's not much but i like those sweet moments. Even tho there are few bugs coming in between their relationship both MC and FMC are swatting those bugs away and i do hope that author won't make any changes to their relationship especially cheating, NTR, etc it would be worst.i think that's it. Thanks for the novel and hope u keep up the good work??
This is what I’m looking for...
Highly recommended... Am in love with this book...
Great suspense. page turner. hope you will finish this book this time.
Love the book and the fact it is mulitples.