WRITING QUALITY IS AMAZING. AUTHOR CONTINUOUSLY WORKING ON HIS IDEAS. ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE MANAGED WELL. I LIKE THE PRESENTATION AND WORK OF AUTHOR.RECOMMANDING THIS NOVEL.
Absolutely enticing and we'll written novel. I love that there's no system or powerful drugs to unnaturally boast the MC. just some talent mixed with hardwork,a mature mind and past experiences. Can't wait to see his journey dealing with everything in his rise.Absolutely love that his black just makes it more relatable. very curious if you'll tackle some of the problems "black athletes" come across in the sports world especially football ⚽️. And the pressure or lack of it some of the truly very top players face. eg messi,cr7,lebron,Tom Brady,pat mahomes,mbappe,Otani etc.the pressure of winning individual trophies but not yet team success or vice versa.Only wish their was more updates. thanks for the beautiful story hopefully it's written to completion. I'll be here till it ends.
a good start, the world building is interesting. if there some downside in this novel is probably the mc personality in the start because it give me some mix messages I though he was a bit smart and have decent common sense but then at some later chap, he become a bit idoitic and inconsistent with his mindset, but author said it for the sake of character development. Well overall its a pretty good novel!
Very good story but I can tell that the story doesn't click with me. Might try to read more later but will probably not. Hopefully this gets finished and not dropped.
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Xia Shishu was an ordinary 17-year-old high school student with immortal story love. System chose him as its Host,System looks quite normal, but his mindset gradually changed as time passed. System that allowed him to transcend the limitations of the human body!His sister’s persistence in addition to the emergence of his System, Xia Shishu entered the newly released Virtual Reality game, Second Reality! To his amazement, the items he received in-game can also be taken outside to the real world and vice-versa!With a combination of his System & Second Reality, his life should become more amusing!I love story but no up date for 6 month. So I gues droped ):
I like the story!.... It's kinda similar to arifureta, the theme is a bit alike but this has more possibilities, i'm quite intrigue with the hidden potential of the cook and librarian job.... I hope for you to continue updating this Novel........
The story seems promising, I adore strong MC who can be a hero for themselves so that is a plus. However there is a few mistakes that can easily be fix through a proofread. ?
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i like this novel please keep updating and don’t just drop it
Loved the story's background and setting as well as the characters I read. The author has a vivid imagination and has created a world for us to enjoy! Great Job!