I'm loving this story so far it's so beautiful and detailedI can't wait to see more character development on Amanda and i hope her and Elias end up together
I haven't read this story, but I've reviewed the synopsis. The premise seems familiar: the protagonist, Mc, is betrayed by his friend, family, and girlfriend, which is quite common. In his second life, after dying, why does he choose to become a villain after experiencing betrayal? Take Naruto's Madara for instance; he was betrayed by Black Zetsu, much like many other villains in various stories.Instead of this predictable plot, why not portray Mc in his second life as someone who finds it hard to trust others, who is cautious and even prepared to resort to extreme measures like a suicide bomb if betrayed again? I dislike this synopsis because the protagonist seems naive; how could he not realize something was wrong with his lover, friend, or the people he cares about days or weeks before the betrayal? It's frustrating to see a character portrayed as careless and clueless.It would be more compelling to mention in the synopsis that Mc doesn't die alone but manages to take down one or two people with him before his demise. Hope author accept my critique, if you want to make another novel please.
Only 3 chapters in and finding it interesting.
Will reply when I find the name of the real novel (I read a lot, don't sort my novels into lists well), but this is absolutely plagiarized, much like all this author's other works. Do not read support them.
The first chapter already got me invested, I'm still going to need time to read more but I shall. Mia and Olivia are already fun characters I wish to learn more. And the mystery man of the graveyard? Can't wait to learn more!
This story is pretty good. Even though it has a few grammatical errors but they aren't so bad that it stops you from enjoying the story. The character, the world, the plot, everything's really great.
Garbage, dumb mc, a lot of plot holes. (An author can’t make a smart mc if he’s dumb.)
A great start! I can tell that a lot of thought was put into writing these chapters and they are emotional and entertaining to read. Highly recommended.
this story is not for everyone read if just enjoy
I found the story's premise captivating, especially with the intriguing twists and turns that keep it engaging.
i read reincarnated as a dragon hatchling atleast to the last currently made chapter {744} and i wanted to read something similar yet a bit different this is what i hoped to find and if someone enjoys storys where a lot hapens but with some breaks in action then this is truly a good one at that
I really like this book although there are some flaws. I've seen previous reviews and critiques on how the book should go. Unfortunately, by my opinion - The Author/Translator has the final say. It is his novel. Im a fan. Although it took some chapters to get into it. By when it hit, "IT HITS". Keep doing what you're doing and please upload more asap. Like all books, "GOOD BOOKS" - It gets more interesting as the pages unfold. Of course you're gonna have a hard time at first. Just read the summary if you're the type only want action now. LOL Hulk came to mind when I wrote "ACTION NOW"!!! But yeh, the more in depth the book is, the more satisfying the read. If people are gonna complain that it should be a certain way, ask them to have you proof-read their novels. ***Spoiler Alert - THEY PROBABLY DONT WRITE OR HAVE A CREATIVE IMAGINATION TO WRITE, ???. But yeh, awesome book, but i need to know more - so upload, upload, upload. If you're able, I seen that you were ill and that caused a delay. Thank you