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writing quality:4. not many problems and it is legible. Some editing would really help.
stability of updates:5. very frequent. not much else to say here.
story development:5. story is developing. fast. very fast. mainly due to the insane leveling speed of the main character that there needs to be a fast plot development.
character design:2. main character is bland. side characters are bland. every person seems bland. All that is known is a not very ugly guy grinding in insanely fast speed because he knows things due to reincarnation and that he isolates himself.
world background:2. not enough details that would explain the world. It is one thing to neglect the real world as the main focus is the game but to neglect the world building in the game as well? that's a big mistake. in the beginning village it can be excused because MC really just skipped past it and just grinded until he could enter the city. But even after he enters the city there are still no details. MC just goes somewhere and he is there. where is the direction? what does the place look like? what are the landmarks? MC is just grind grind grinding that the world building is severely lacking.
THE BIGGEST FLAW OF THIS BOOK: EXP GAIN
Before level 10, the exp for a level up seems to be in the hundreds. between 10-20 the exp seems to be in the hundred thousands seeing the levels he gained from killing first boss class monster. okay. explainable as he has 300% exp gain from his title. good explanation right? no. MC is a VERSATILE class, which author stated IS INSANELY HARD TO LEVEL UP. Following that reasoning, MC should at best be slightly ahead of the other players, given his knowledge from reincarnation that gives him an edge over others. However, by chapter 34 every other player is still below level 20. guess where our MC is at? OVER 50. Author also stated in the beginning that it took him about 25 years to reach level 500 so here I thought it would take awhile but our MC gets to level 50 is like less than a week (or is it a month?). In any case. at that pace, MC will probably get to level 500 in probably a year.
Don't expect too much. It's not the worst, but neither is it the best. If you can ignore the exp problem, this is great for reading if you got nothing else and are waiting for other novels to update.
Please don't drop the book
Jadikan suasana menjadi lebih hidup. Dan karakter yang lebih mendalam dengan sifat yang mendalami suasana atau dengan suatu masalah yang dilih berganti.
First if it get picked up you haw More than 3000 Chapters to Enjoy
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and to the Novel it is a bit generic in some part's and in the beginning it Might fell Confusing and Slow but will pick up after you read a bit in to the Novel and Gotten The MC's Story and stuff explained and such but after all that crap it will start picking up and get more interesting as it flows so Give it a shot if you haw Nothing ells to read and see if it's your cup if tee or not after you read a bit =^-^= Meow
My personal opinion is 3 star it is bit generic hear and ther and Can fell slow but all in all I still Like reading this novel as some thing to read between my main Novels im following and would recommend ppl to give it a try at least if this Typ is in your interest at-least
I think overall the flow and story is good and addictive
I almost everything about this story with the only thing I don't like about it is the status page because it's really confusing imo. The MC Is hilarious and I can't wait for her toaster army
Well, it is a good story for an use isekai I suppose but there doesn’t seem to be much of what has been promised. Quite the contrary the MC is cliche in every way of plot armor possible so far. The only thing might be that the MC doesn’t like the role he is pressured into but this is nothing special and has been done before. Another aspect is that the world building seems rather strange to me. You have kingdoms, cultivators and high technology like tablets and phones. This seems very strange and is likely to create contradictions down the line.
Well I’ll be not giving up hope just yet to find what the author promised but I doubt I will find it here.
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respect +5 for making magic in english, not chinese XD.........................................................................////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
MC always one step ahead well multiple even us, grate work!!! ???
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