Great story so far. I really like Shade's character, his qualities are unique to say the least. His suspicion towards people might actually be a good thing in this survival game. Can't wait to see what happens inside his mind as he goes on playing for his life.
The writing quality well... I didn't expect such clean pages from a writer here in this site. There are some paragraphs where active voice could be used to reduce the word redundancy, but that's just me nitpicking. The reader can expect a smooth read without being interrupted by errors.
Story is unfolding through a third point of view. I have no complaints about the pacing of the book as well. I can't really say anything about the world building yet but this novel has the potential to keep a reader hooked. The author has smartly used the trending elements here (death game, unsocial mc, game world, etc). However, I believe the author will make a difference which hundreds of other writers fail at doing.
Am I the only one here still occasionally visiting this page hoping for a new chapter
Let me be honest, I have a very big love-hate relationship with this novel. I love it since author is trying to make this cliche story interesting in a very unique way. I hate it because the dramas inside this story is beyond what I can handle. I came here for the harem but I stayed for the girls. MC is worth nothing in my eyes. He could die for all I care. I'm staying to see the smiles of these girls. 5 stars for the story but 1 star for shattering my heart into pieces and burn it with fire extinguisher then sprinkle my ash on a chicken breast to feed author's pet.
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It is an amazing work, sure the author has made mistakes but that is part of being human and he fixed them and apologized, ignore the self-righteous salty whiners who act as if they haven't messed up before and continue to beat a dead horse. They only decided to complain in the reviews after it was put back up(after fixing the mistakes), showing signs of cancel culture which I am sure most people are sick of.
The concept is pretty good and so are the characters as well, but there are a few things that I don't like. First— You revealed his greatest secret in just a few chapters if it was in 100 or so chapters it would be good and second the author should have written it in the third person point of view, that would be great and easy to understand.
translation is so bad. it is killing my brain cells.
one of the best stories I've read so far, the story really stretches itself and there's a lot of filler. Though the plot is interesting, and the world building is impeccable. All in all, a pretty great story.
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The Raw passion of the author was visible in every word. But his grasp on grammar and the writing method is what undoes his efforts. But it seems like the author is learning and improving.But unfortunately the author needs (I don't have any authority to say this) to rewrite or revamp the novel a little bit.Story and concept wise, it's cool and has a lot of potential, so I really hope the author succeeds in his first novel.?
this story is absolute trash like other chinese novel .well there were some Chinese novel which is good but most lf them are banned by chinese government.
Great book but you could separate that things they said and make things more clearer but overall great book and can't wait for more chapters