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I love this book but the only thing I sont like about it is that the characters should be able to asses the problem quicker. dont listen to me I just need the points/pass
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
It's finally back let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Just a simple review.Writing quality - 5Stability of updating - 5Story development - 5Character design - 5World background - 4Mc is evil,smart,cunning and the characters arent dumb.I have high expectations for this novel.
Kingdom Building novel ohh yeahhh! Please pick up this novel it was great novel im so excited about the story development. And i got the vibe from RTW hehehe
Translater please actually try to translate the novel wellh70t7v7tv7tv6rcc6ir5sxid5xicr6c6r6rctgyYUHHJYUYUUUIYIUIYIYIYUUYIYIYIYIYUH
Cliché1. Gets cheat2. Gets OP super baby angel3. Gets OP 4. Stomps in everything in his way5. Nothing can stop himThere's not plot development, it's just him following his systems instructions like a life oath. No Character development as well, he's just stereotypical handsome MC that abuses his system like a wife.No world background except the regular beasts everywhere, abyss bad.
Good story to read to past time When is other chapters coming or did the author drop this one MC is good not the typical hidden his strength then few chapters he shows his strength but MC is just farming and cultivating and not hiding his powers I don’t know down the road if it might change
Some parts are a bit chaotic and confusing. I also think the flow is too quick and the story needs more descriptions.However,the idea has potential.Keep it up!
you sad person
it's a great novel actually with a great start,i recommend to all of to read this novel,but the chapter seem to short.............,..........
A good novel and my favorite system with a op starting point but one thing is that the chapter is a little to slow. So PLZ update a little faster btw the novel is good and keep improving on how the MC will do in the future.
