I really enjoy this story. However, what I like about this story might be what turns people off from this story. My favorite thing is that this story is so nonsensical with a barely functioning plot. It is really similar to "Am I a God" which is a webnovel that had its translations finished a while ago. If you enjoy the dynamic between Zhao Yao and his cats from "Am I a God
When I saw this book first I really thought it's pretty good. I still think the premise isn't bad, but when I try to read it I feel like I'm draining my braincells. (For example even though they live in china he has 3 sisters...) The MC is an absolute retard and the great company whose products he should review acts completly irrational. His sisters are funny tho. But still overall not readable for me.
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This is a very good story till now. ( Ch12 )The language and grammar could use some work. Author - kun, i recommend that you read the book - 'high school grammar and comprehension by wren and martin'Keep up the good work.
I'm sorry I live the story but caun still not reaching tier one is insane it's giving me blood warlock flashbacks ?
Firstly I have to mention that this is a great novel with an intresting concept. The mc is not cliche and has a real personality and furthermore he is not flawless.He is an introvert but in reality he wants to socialise with others._Writing Quality_The writing quality is pretty good and there are very few mistakes (I am not an englsih native speaker so you probably will find more than I though)._Stability of Updating_The author posts a day, but sometimes he misses a day but makes up for it in the later days._Story Developpment_It has to be said that this is a slow story but as soon as he ~Spoiler~enters the new world the progress is normal.It is clear that the author has an idea for the plot and the story follows a clear "path"_Character Design_The characters are all interesting and have their own flaws.Even though you can guess the personality of a character, there are some plot twists which seem understandebal but unexpected.~Spoiler~Additionally you can see how the MC fights his asocial personality and socalises more and more-World Backround_The world has a clear structure and there is nothing that happens, that seems totally random. The wolrd is furthermore intresting and you want to know more abou it.All in all it is a fun read and you should give it a try.[At this point the story reached 73 chapters so far and things can change and this review would be inaccurate]I have to remind you that this is my first review so please do not blame me to much if you dont like it
The story is getting worse as it progresses.MC was cautious and smart at the start, then he became dumber as the story progressed. He became dumbest when he got a companion fairy. Then he forgot almost all his gaming knowledge.Earlier when he thought that death was permanent, he was fine killing fellow humans. Later he found out it was only temporary, now he spares other humans.His personality also changed. Now he likes showing off and not finishing the fights quickly.I stuck so far because i liked the starting. I still think it would have been an excellent story if the author didn't purposely made it worse. To keep the story excellent all he had to do was make the MC's character consistent. Was is too much to ask for?
If you're looking for a good read that seemingly never stops with Daily updates, a massive world with detailed explanations and beautiful imagery then look no further. you've found it here in Walker Of the Worlds. This Weak to Strong Cultivation story follows a young cultivators journey not only across his home world but out into the depths of the void in search of more knowledge and power!
WARNING WARNINGSIMP MC WHO NEEDS VALIDATION FROM WOMEN WHO ONLY WANT HIM FOR HIS POWER AND STRENGTH I ALMOST PUKED FROM HOW MUCH HE’S OBSESSED WITH WOMEN WHO COULDN’T CARE LESS ABOUT HIM
Although its regretable that this novel is locked behind the fast pass wall of money, it is definitely a novel worth reading as despite the misleading title, it talks about the life of a prison warden and the ensuing character development of the prisoners, leading them to a better life instead of the crime filled one
From the first page, I was pulled in. Although slightly cliche with the dream sequence, it does a wonderful job of setting up the plot and made me question what would happen next. We as readers get a good idea that Dax may be more than what meets the eye. Another thing I liked in particular was how the author was able to describe things. The details are nicely done and adds a basic foundation to the characters and the world. The world building also seems interesting, I liked the concept of the nanites and the advanced world that Dax lives in. Dax and Fay also hit it off pretty well, so I'm curious to see if that's a possible shipping route, lol. The first few chapters are a slow build up, but there is lots of foreshadowing that tells you to just hang on for the ride. With that being said, there were some grammatical errors and sometimes the character interactions fall flat, but other than that, this story has a lot of potential and I look forward to reading more chapters from this awesome author. Keep up the good work, Choas! :)
Interesting book, I'll wait to see how it develops between the leads