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Pretty good so far writing wise, I know this writer is working on multiple novels as well so keep up the good work with the both of them. Same last name as a certain someone as well, curious how it will tie later on..
Sloth, my dude, my man. Do you have to put your MC through all that? We're the chains and the void is not enough. Now he's blood ends with magic and has blood loss? You'll likely kill him before he can do anything.And yes, I did read a few chapters before reviewing.
please post more chapters brother, don't drop it I really need more chapters.?? I am impressed by everything in this story, sometimes i do have problems but those are just minor issues. Also even if there are bad reviews don't let them affect you and please continue writing.
great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised.Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read.other than that great job author, keep it up
He got a special system...he didnt know function....he was threatened by system. Due his transmigration he had to do everything to save his soul...he got underlings, closed to his sister, became from loser to something else...and his system brought him suprise....everyone could use only one element, how about to use more than one? And if you go on journey, take your home :)
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very good startwaiting for more updates to decide how this story will play Author release more chapters...........................................................................
quando sai o proximo capitulo.gostei muito do começo, aguardando +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
the first hundred chapters are the most interesting and well written, it's a pity that then the quality of the novel has fallen dramatically. Especially the useless clone chapters. Or the fact that MC lets go of his enemies every time - settlers or clones of the dragon emperor. Yes, he explains that they have life-saving techniques or artifacts, but most of them should not have such things as they come out of ordinary society. Extremely long chapters. It was one of the xiangxia that I really LOVED, but now it's not readable. :(
Garbage. The MC and the rest of the peanut gallery are brain dead morons.
This novel is literally a copy and paste of another system store Manger theme novel. The only difference is the name of the characters and items. Don't recommend reading this trash.