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I don't usually meddle with reviews but I got to do it this time around. It could be seen as moving off my comfort zone. A good novel made me to do such. Keep up the good work author.
All in all I'm trying to figure out why these always read like wish fulfillment works.The MC always winds up becoming an absolute nightmare and as far from thier original self as possible. All while failing to realise they're far worse than those they hated in the first place.Truly it would be nice if for once the old addage of When seeking revenge be sure to dig two graves would happen.
Really everything was fine until the mc got emotionally blackmailed into accepting another girl. It’s really disappointing. Even the relationship with the other girl is really flat and is just nice to read or to be ignored. And no one ever come at me with strong people alwys have many girls around them. Every strong ninja in Naruto has 1 wife. Was good until chap 54 even tho it was basically a training montage
This story is god tier. Like why hasn't it gotten a anime with 20 seasons yet!? On the real note the story character development is nice natural and isn't rushed. I came in here expecting the usual but found gold instead. No regrets randomly adding this great story to my library and favorites list. I hope for 1000+ chapters
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This novel is too funny and unique i almost got fired because i keep laughing in my job because of this novel....it brings a new refreshing type of reading
A good start. I liked the plot. The pacing was slow and fast at times. I wish it was a little more steady. The grammar could use some work and mc seems kind of shallow. I mean, one para, he's excited, the next para he's startled and the next para he's shaking from fear. I wouldn't have complained about this if this wasn't the first chapter. I personally think this needs an edit. But overall, it was a good story.
Dari capter 1 ke 30 sih seru, lucu & asik, eh chapter 31 ke 40 ko hambar gada seru seru nya gara gara salapaham sih pencuri aja jadi gak asik tuh
5 ⭐spamming..... but I am sure it won't be selected......sigh*.then I will be in fahrenheit I am not against the spirit of fair play that all the best to you too much complex and near me know if you are free to contact me at the end of the day of my android phone on T-Mobile USA and Canada and Australia and Europe and America or maybe japan girl in the world did you expect to receive e-mails like this is the issue of translation and definition of this cuteness overload protection of human life force.....
the translation is quite bad, the story development is wack and non-sensical, the premise itself could work but it's not working as it is in this novel and the character design and the world background are just plain bad, there's no ryme or reason for most cliches, the character make stupid decision calling and call themselves smart in the next paragrahp, the world background canno decide what to be and i suspect this would star feeling the same after a couple "story arcs". Conclusion: it's waste of time
The translation feels super lazy, there are a ton of inconsistencies, especially the names of sects or moves, in one sentence, the name of a sect would be Paradise Palace, the immediate next sentence, they would change the name to Elysium Palace. This is not the only example, as this would happen all the time and is super immersion breaking.To be honest, I don't even mind the characters and the world being one dimensional as that is the case for 80% of the translated novels nowadays, but I can't even continue to read this due to having to constantly try to figure out what the translations are saying.