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**Please read until the end of volume one until you decide whether to drop or not! If you can’t tolerate the drama, you will be missing out. Zombie and Cranberry’s relationship is SO MUCH better. I have privilege and I’ve bought all the chapters so far, I would know. Honestly, their dynamic relationship is my favorite part about the story!**It honestly makes me sad to see that people drop this novel after the 6th chapter. The villainess, or Cranberry, and Zombie are around SEVEN years old 6 chapters in. However, she DOES NOT act like a normal child does. Some people also missed the fact that she seems AFRAID of what her mother will do to her when she was beating Zombie. Why? It is revealed at the END of volume ONE. Trust me, you will NOT hate Cranberry. In fact, there is a character you will hate more! Writing quality: [5/5] It’s good so far. Some typos here and there, but nothing major. Would’ve put 4.5/5, but I can’t do a half star.Updating stability: [5/5] We’re given 2 chapters a day at 5AM and 5PM PST if nothing happens to the author. 2 a day is plenty alreadyStory development: [5/5] IMO, the story is amazing. I love the direction the author is taking it and I’m hooked!Character design: [5/5] I love Zombie and Cranberry’s character and I love their development. The characters are lifelike, but their common sense is obviously different from ours because their world is different.World background: [3/5] We don’t really know a lot about the world because of Zombie’s rotten brain skill. This means that we can only learn from whatever information Cranberry gives us, if she ever does. In addition, we haven’t started the “otome game” setting yet. I’ll update this when we get there.If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
good read. easy on mind. no complicated plots in story development. Of course MC is always over powered as usual. i would definitely recommend this for leisure reading. ok enjoy friends.
Other reviews dont bring justice to this novel. Even if the novel is a bit cliche, it is fast paced compared to others and mc is BRUTAL. The brutality gets me hooked.
It's a pretty good novel. even though it's start to get boring in later 200 chapter but it's a good novel to kill time , btw if mc doesn't have sister it's might be even better.
Why this kind novel always never get noticed by the editor(the editor is suck,always choose Cultivation ****):v..................................
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I had enjoyed this until the 8 yr old had to carry a useless but pretty Scarlet Johansson because she acts worse than a 8 yr old and is creepy in her behavior towards a kid. And i swear the author cant talk about a female without stating how pretty she is every two seconds. Considering he is a 8 yr old this seems to be over done and just turns creepy. Somehow authors can even turn a story about a young kid be surrounded by beautiful woman. Bet if he was old enough this would be harem. And how creepy the author is it may still turn out to be harem
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Very good stories, updates are great, Mc is a rock, and this is one of a kind.YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
too fast mate,the story develop too fast,just hope you could slow down the pace of the story,in just 3 chapter he got to admiral strength, it's too fastt
very good!!! I'm loving the story, the protagonist is also very captivating, I expected him to be darker in relation to the monsters, more until it's cool.Keep up the great work!!!
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