Bro keeping going nice work, so don't drop it I will support your work fully.Really a nice work.The story is pretty good and the character is also very good.
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Stopped on chapter 15, this novel is extremely creative and is good at having you wonder about the world/mc, however, it is hard to immerse yourself in due to its serious need of an editor. If English isn’t your first language it might be your cup of tea. Had to give world building a 3/5 as not really anything has been explained as of yet. Gave character building a 4/5 because the side characters are decently fleshed out thus far except for a few minor details. I believe with an editor both issues can be easily recitfied.
The World setting and starting point is from Perfect World... A willow tree guardian, A stone Village, Kid name Shi Hao. If you want to know more about world setting Perfect world is good book
Standard cultivation novel. A cut above the rest in most aspects but not outstanding. It is still a passable read after many hundreds of chapters though which is a difficult task for most authors to pull off. So on this aspect alone its a worthy read.
The story is pretty good.However,i'd advise you to change the cover.The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good.So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story.Apart from this your story is very nice.
This novel is the best and would be great as a movie adaptation... IMHO...anyways it's not completed and I have read all 246 chapters and I hope it didn't get dropped....but I think it did or the author isn't on Webnovel anymore *long sigh* It really sucks when a diamond like this novel gets buried.
Well it's kinda interesting.. nice job!I'll wait for more chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MoremoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMoremoreMoreMoreMoreMoremoreMoreMoremoreMore
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Great novel! I love the narration, the main character feels really interesting and I like the way he thinks/acts. It's a very captivating read and I definitely suggest it!
This story isn't exactly bad but It also isn't that great either. I think the main problem I have with this story is the speed at which the MC improves. It just makes no sense, and is also rather unsatisfying. Take for example his blacksmithing. Every time the author mentions the subject, it's always saying how it takes years upon years to progress a level. While it takes the MC ONE DAY. That is absolute nonsense. Even if you have a godlike teacher. The author also doesn't explain how things work either. Like the warrior levels; maybe I missed it but how do warriors level up? The MC just seems to level up just because he worked till exhaustion. Is that how that works? If so why does it take years for other warriors to level up. Regardless it's unsatisfying how fast the MC does things. The translation quality is fine, although its also a little boring too. That could just be the authors writing style though. The world is okay, if not a little dull. The MC himself is pretty meh too. He has this kind of faux complexity with his love, father, and whatever. Its boring and generic. Alright, well I wrote a lot for no reason, so sorry for a rant I guess. In conclusion don't bother with this story unless you have nothing better to do.
I think that this one was really similar to Night Ranger and The Legendary Mechanic on here. There is going to be something happening soon and the MC arrived before that event. He begins to prepare for it. I caught up to like ch 500 through the MTLs but I got tired of MTL. Good to see that this is back. I think my criticisms have to do with the characters being kind of flat and one dimensional. But I think the action and other parts of it make up for it. Other series that are similar to this one are Age of Adepts and Warlock of the Magus World. If you liked any of the before mentioned series, then I think you'll like this one.