If you keep reading, the story will continue to be interesting that cannot be understood in one or two chapters, the ahead you read, the more interesting the story will be. In many places, I found unnecessary capitalization, along with many spelling mistakes that I pointed out.But your dialogue is good. Even in many places, you have chosen the word very well. I had fun reading, keep it up.
interesting
Good story, the main character does not conform to either the stereotypical god-like villain mold, nor does he conform to the stupidly op hero mold. He seems human-like in that he makes mistakes, but at the same time, his foreknowledge should not be underestimated. All in all linri harclaw, and the soul inside him named max is a character that is human and relatable. His fellow companions are human like as well displaying flaws and mistakes that make the novel all the more compelling.
RECCOMENDED! READ THIS!!!i don't know man..... slow and confusing are the words and oh... I read the first 10 chapters and jumped to the latest, the story progressed by 3%
alright so far so good, the mc doesn't seem like a weakling like the MC of Immortal in a reverse world or something, anyway for people who haven't read it yet I wouldn't say it's Ground Breaking but it is Decent...for how long will it stay like that is the question tho.Oh and don't bother about those low reviews it's clear there just dissatisfied that the mc is not the one being conquered, but I mean c'mon what did you expect?This is webnovel the land of the Horni's if you want something like that look somewhere else
Someone left a 1 star review simply because you can read this book on other site -_- I'm leaving this review to counter that, apart from my regular review of teh story.
Hello! I've started your novel for a while and I pretty much like it! I'm a huge fan of zombie stories and I can't find a fix since TWD in the comicbook version ended for a while before. Most of the things here have OP powers and would move away from what I prefer.This thing is the closest thing I could find that is next to the one I like! Thanks for this! I'll give another review when I catch up!
Good story line. Bad grammar. Many of the chapters are disconnected. Should be edited again.
interesting ...️...️
freaking phenomenal! i was laughing, crying shocked...happy. all of the above! very well written!!
awesome book!
I Loved this book. Can't wait for book 2.