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Currently chapter 4This was a novel about wolves....a book similar to the Call of the wild book I've read when I am just a kid. It really captivated me at the first chapter. The description was awesome. Keep up the good work author san!Release more chapters!
Just to make it clear to everyone who is coming into this story, neither I, who am the author, liked the beginning of this story, if you're looking to read a good story, in the beginning, don't read it.That was my first story and the beginning is *a m a t e u r* and even I don't like it, so if you care a lot about grammar and some stupid choices, I don't advise you to read it.MY DISCORD: https://discord.gg/P5JynPh
It's really a unique book and I love it, I did be very happy to recommend this book to other readers and other authors and can't wait to see this growing, Love your work author, I really enjoyed reading this book honestly, They are a few mistakes but who doesn't make mistakes anyway we all do include me but this book will make you forget about the mistakes and continue reading and craving for more, This is one of the longest reviews I wrote, Please guys read and support this book !!!
Hello. This novel is kinda a sequel to Xiling Empire novel so maybe you can translate it too. It is a little bit unfair to new readers to tell about empire, system and emperor without preview how it was created and stuff like that.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Interesting. This plot is new for me. At least, he do the want to be op, and complain. But that's not the Good point. The most funny is how other tries to protect him and make him live longer. Also from other reviews, I think it's I interesting enough. Can't wait for more CHAPTERs
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Five stars because i feel like it,Its not like everytime i read it i always end up with a smile or something it's only because i feel like it that I commented and rated.
awesome read so far, I like how the author repeadly grinds through the beginner area over and over until he is like a god among all the other players.
Please review the translation fron chapter 60 onwards, IS A DISASTER, it's a great novel, i like It, but f**k, it's translation is lacking. The names of the characters are changing all the time even on the same chapter, it's the same with the names of some cities.It change the genre of characters, it's difficult to understand a conversation between a men and a women when the only pronoun on It is she or he.help this reader to enjoy this novel.
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very interesting online novel because I can actually see the attachment between the real sense and the fiction but one thing that I love is that the author has a real sense for perfect setup
