This book is a joke infact it's so foolish it's no funny, the idea is great and all but the execution is crappy. The whole Liu family is retarded the ancestor system is stupid so stupid it's useless. The book has potential no doubt but the cliche and inconsistencies are to much to read its dreadful.Verdict this only when your very very very bored.
How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice!Spicy Tiansai! ! !
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A good short story, doesn't drag on forever with harem building and endless challenges. If the MC is OP then he should be able to finish his opponents quickly which is what this character does. Think of it as the common sense approach.
Honestly your story was one of the best on this site, but the las 4-5 chapters since the end of the tournament don't really fill me with hope for the next part of your story... I mean i know your mc is not omnipotent, but with the extremly long life he had, and all the dificulty for reaching the peak , he should have known to not show his hand so soon... :( Look what happened now, the members of his clan are killed like flies, what was the point of create a clan so soon if it's got destroyed so easily :(
Good stuff this is. Also, completely unrelated, I hate that we need at least 140 character to post a review. But this novel is great. I like this novel, but hate the minimum character requirements on reviews.
Overall i rate this story below average. Let’s start with the main character. In his past life in the future he was one of the absolute best players of a cultivation mmorpg. He apparently memorized all the video fames cultivation techniques (as if a game would ever explain to the player how the fireball skill worked) and has a perfect memory of his worlds past 10000 years history. Note “world” not country. So even in our premise, the main character is unbelievable. He gets sent into the past to inhabit the body of a trash(but secretly super op) young master. It is explained that his mother is a legendary 7 tailed fox spirit and his father some legendary human. Then later his dad is suddenly a legendary 9 tailed fox. Where the hell is the human coming from? Also mixed breeds is a thing in this past life, but no one has ever bothered to look into helping mixed breeds learn how to cultivate apparently because EVERYONE is as dumb as the author. The main character in his weak(not weak) body gets to his first fight and proceeds to one shot someone 8ish cultivation ranks higher. This downgrades the main character to a one star Wannabe one punch man. Side characters. We meet two temp side characters. It mysterious OP guy who new the MC’s dad, and catgirl 13 year old lolly who os really around 6 in her own people’s life. Naturally our main character drools like the pedophile he, and no doubt the author are, as this lolly gets drenched and the main character proceeded to admire her curves. World. The world is an absolute mystery, and by that i mean the main character knows every about it while having amnesia about the world. It gets 2 stars only because it give us a description of one town, sorta. In summary , i am dropping this story as i am against pedophelia. I recommend you do the same.
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Sorry about this .... I find the idea of the novel promising. However i keep finding it lacking... Take this as point to improve.1. You need to explain always how stats work. Dont put stats like str agi int char res without proper explaining what they are for.2. You need to stick with the idea that mc is a isekai/reincarnated person from earth. So he should probably know how to play any for of rpg games. However for the the last 30+ chapter i have read the mc dont give a **** at all.3. What is the mechanic of his system. How does he gain the skills. What is the use of level up. How many free stat point do he gain every lvl. No explaination was given thus making the whole thing confusing.4. Explain the power ranking of the world. Explain the world his on more. Its not like earth you know. His leveling up how does everybody else getting strong. It not like his the only person strong in the story.
Why are none of the reviews reviews? Ur giving it unjustified ratings!?140 140 140 140 140 140 140 **** 140 140 140 140 140 fml 140 140 140 140
When i write this i am at chapter 129. I was honestly rating those 5 Categories now, but my personal rating of the whole story would be 0/5.Let me explain you how come i read until 129 if it is that bad. STORY / BACKGROUND The story started quite good, apparently it is playing a few thousand years or so in the future, technology advanced, humans colonized the universe. So far nothing wrong. Cultivation system kinda works in a way, where there are inactive genes in humans and by activating and strengthening your genes you advance. There are all kinds of genes like monkey gene and stone gene (synopsis). So that sounded kinda refreshing and was the reason why i found the novel interesting, thus countinues reading it. Of course there were some trash sections like superiors in a company manually handling a few million subordinates in a personal talk even when a common salesperson AI is so advanced that it could count as artificial human. But well i could overlook this and it atleast not heavily disrupting the flow.A bit further in the story it finally arrived. Racism. From that moment onwards racism suddenly was extremely present in the story. It was not only against other “races” but also against other mythologies (btw race is not a biological concept, something like Chinese race doesn’t exist in biology, this is only narrative and politics).Let me state some examples of racism here. There are some people in the story who have chinese origin but look western, those are commonly named “egg-humans” by the author, fyi.“For Feng Lin to give up on his blood lineage and turn into those disgusting egg-humans? No Way ! This was the baseline he had as a human”. So apparently as long as you are human, obviously your only wish would be to be Chinese. Somewhere between chapter 50-100 racism goes up very steep and I promise you that at chapter 100 it is completely unreadable, you will either completely puke every chapter or become a degenerade. You can try yourself it’s a fine read in the first 50 chapters or so.Also a warning: I´ve read many chinese novels and i know there is rarely one without racism, but comparing those to this one is just... well this one tops them all.TL;TRFirst 50-100 chapter are fine, then the amount of racism and bullshit makes me puke. Stopping at 129.
Best novel here in Webnovel.comI advise you guys to read this, very interesting, very funny, very intriguing.Nice Translations, Good World Building, Good Character Design.I give a review of 5.0 Stars!!This review is for Explooooosion!!!