First thing first, i only read up till' the 35 chapter. So, i can't say much. Every thing is great and has a lot of potential (it is too fast-paced for me though). Two things that irked me the most are the forced comedy and Jezzebeth's death. The forced comedy you can read it for yourself and see, it's not that bad though. The author don't give Jezze much screen time, and that sucks. When she died, we get some flashbacks of her time with the Mc. Like, if the author spend more time with her. Fleshing her out, giving her more life. The death would've been more impactful for us readers. The quality of the story would've been up a notch. I just hate characters with good potential get snuffed too early without shining.
I love the characters and the World Background Great novel
Locked by Chapter 10.. No chance to see any quality development or story potential. Short chapters and rushed power explanations. Potential is high but can't be realized.
Hm i like the mc but i dont like overprotective sisters it just makes me uncomfortable but the story is a great read for me and i like it maybe i will let it stockpile till its on chapter 100 and then read it boodbye
https://discord.gg/vBcvjAEFor those who want to discuss about this novel . this is discord link to server that author created . This story is good so I'm hoping many people to join
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I simply cant understand whats so interesting that its even in the top 20.Nothing unique here. As in all other mediocre novels he gets pretty solid plot armor, clan is all of a sudden in danger, sudden jumps in strenght, all of a sudden there is again the unoriginal fatty, dumb enemies not killing cause of some dumb reason...So why is this than in the top 20??
Would have been better if MC wasn't so evil This kind of 'evil hypnotism' is one of the most common tropes seen japanese hentai. I like the concept but I hate this kind of story development. What I mean is, why should MC make the girls as his slaves? Why not into lovers? What's point in having s*x all day? That's just pure wish fulfillment. This could have more realistic and could have been made into a unique and popular novel if the MC wasn't a sadist pervert. Just think about having hypnotizing powers and use it destroy your enemies and not ur loved ones.
Good build up of the story. Always get me at the edge of my seat. Keep up the good work, author. For improvements, please check your grammar.
KING CRIMSON!Also really enjoy the idea of a pet king but instead of owning a store he fights and cheats life with his magic pets. Plus, the story isn't moving slowly like most animal related stories do.
eww~ depicts the characters of Chinese people, they oppressed and threatened their own people to get what they want, yuck~ so this how Chinese government acts, shame on you. A bunch of old men tricking a seventeen year old boy to get the inventions he hold? After I read this my impression of china has go down to drain, boooo!!!
The first 100 or so chapters at very nice. But after that the author goes from slow slice of love to slowmotion.The author fills chapters with unnecessary long explanations for manga, anime, music context. I mean one paragraph is enough for this story but no it’s entire chapters wasted for things I could search online if interested.It’s really sad. Furthermore during the song creation big parts of the songs are just copied in the chapters… just useless space.Also the characters are really nice and deep but most of the conversations are just too friendly and also repetitive. I mean how often do you say thank you to your friends it’s just abnormal.To summarise after 100 chapters the novel is increasingly tiring. And reeks like the author just wants to make more money for usless chapters. I drop this now at chapter 267, hopefully the author goes back to before.