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The synopsis was rather confusing on my part but the story was good. The startup was interesting and the plotline is very planned out. The writing is spot on and the detail is incredible. Great job
You probably has to break your sentences to a few paragraphs so the pace of the story is good . Long sentences , even if your grammar is good , might bore your readers .
Zerg cringe Terran based but ok i will accept
it's freaking Awesome ?, i love absolutely Everything, everything about this novel, (except for the update, although that's an issue only after reaching the 213th chapter)The MC is Kickass, the characters are awesome, the story is smooth sailing, the background is great, everything is Perfect. it's a must read??, I highly recommend it????❤️
a good book with many resourcefulness. protagonist with insight for the development of powers and the system,But I lost myself a little with the powers he already has and things like the technique he gained from James ... Didn't he teach only the first two?
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Loved it. As pretty much every other comment has mentioned, it DOES have "The Gamer" webtoon vibes in the beginning, but I'm telling you now, it goes completely off track from The Gamer later on. I mean, COMPLETELY.Overall it was a very good read, but it's a shame that this is the one and probably the only arc for this novel, as it's been a few months since the last release. I was really looking forward to the next arc, to be honest.
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I like this book it good so far. I am a super critic about these books. and I voted for this book I pay for each month to read books I like but when. the site drop the book And I have to look for it on a other site for free it makes me question why I pay for this site?
There are a few small mistakes in writing which can be a slight turn off, but not enough to ruin this amazing book. The author actually out a lot of thought into the background of his story and has his characters thought out. I haven't seen much character development yet. But the story is still new and I can't wait to see what happens.
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