Another copy paste trash novel.The plot is your classic transmigrate mc into a waste body who get a cheat but also lose some brain cells in the process.
Legitimately one of the worst things I've ever read. The author constantly messes up their own numbers, changing the ranks of things willy nilly.The story was supposed to be about alchemy, but the author quickly makes the MC perfect at literally everything. Magic, strength, alchemy.The author constantly hammers in how hard it is to fight above your level, yet the MC's alchemical creatures are consistently able to fight 1-2 levels above themselves with extreme ease. Adding on to this, the MC makes a potion to make himself a 3-star expert, but is able to overpower a 5-star expert. How? Bad writing, that's how.Why is it so easy to obtain legendary alchemy materials? Everybody and their grandmothers seem to have a least tier 6 alchemy materials. The materials always have some sort of mythical story behind it, but then the MC magically has 5 more. It's ridiculous.Everything is constantly measured in the cost of gold coins, despite how very very obvious it is that the monetary system is completely made up and the numbers thrown around are entirely random.I'm angry I've wasted any iota of my time on this sack of actual rotting garbage.
The only reason I got through 40 chapters of this is because I have low standards when it comes to beast taming stories, so I’ll read almost anything. I would say it’s an average story at best. It’s very predictable if you’ve read other system stories or beast taming stories. If anything, I felt like the number targets for the system were pretty unrealistic.The translation is bad. Aside from grammar and spelling errors here and there, the translation is just sloppy. Although, there do seem to be less mistakes in the latter half of the 40 chapters.
this is a very cool story. I really like the main character's struggle to be strong. He looks so cool. I hope he becomes strong. ????????
i have to say i like the story itself but author you are focusing too much on filling chapters an entire just descriping the characters after about 2 to 5 chpaters i amnot saying it is a bad thing but too many times is annoying as of now i read about 70 chapters that could be written in 50 or less even on good way what's more almost every chapter when you make a change on the scene or switching between two scene you must start as an unknown figure then identifies it man that's honostly too much that's making it annoying too much annoying .the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks
One of the best Harem novels I've read yet, where the character doesn't mindlessly increase his harem. Perfect balance between romance and action. Highly recommend.
This book has a fresh perspective and pov if the characters. The writing style is amazing cause it not only makes me hungry just by reading this but also expresses a lot of emotions (even after having my dinner ?). My only suggestion or complaint is that there are very less chapters!!? Still great work and keep on writing?
raw chapter pls ?????????????????............................................................
1- Bad grammar (close to MTL)2- Bad plot, after unlocking the system we found out that the protagonist can just upgrade his bloodline to the highest tier possible by killing 1000 of the weakest G rank monster, which makes his system very OP, but it's fine, since his goal is survival and he's the one with the OP system and not the Protagonist, why would he enter the academy that will restrict his actions and follow the plot? He could've very easily just used his knowledge of the future and his system to get stronger and gg, but we wouldn't have a novel if it went that way, so our Extra had to enter the academy and do what every other extra does...Anyway I just feel like this novel has no soul, most things are done just to include the cliche's that we readers already know of or just to copy/parody/be inspired by other novels, but the fact is, that certain plots work on these other novels because the MC doesn't have an OP system (Novel's extra, The Author's POV, The Villain wants to live, etc), in all of these novels the MC had to follow the plot, because mostly he needed the protagonist of the world to become strong, not the case in this novel since the MC also has a system, so we're just fed a plot we don't want and get bored really f* fast.Protagonist = Protag of the novelMC =Extra = Our protag (Lucas)
I'm really loving this story. Keep up the work author
Is this the original author or did someone just copied it from Royal Road or scribblehub where author posted it till 110 chapters...............
BRoo author this is some good shii but wryyyyyy it was free 2 days ago now i have to pay to read the rest of the chapters bro wryyy im broke rn?