I love poems so much, and this one in particular is worded so well, it takes me back to my high schools days, when I’d borrow random books from the library and forget to return them back.
Good storyline!! It's interesting to read, story is moving smooth , although writing quality is also nice but needs some more improvements waiting for more updates , good job keep it up author!!
This Author has turn Dragon Ball into a Chinese novel. The name's of all iconic character's are completely Chinese name that are completely different, also the grammar is bad like I could barely read it. Author change KI into QI, messed up on all titles for gods an everything. The most disturbing thing to watch out for is goku name in this book is not goku anymore. If you see any 5 star or 4 star review then it's fake. Though all that said the Author did a pretty good job on creating his MC that's why the 2 star. Also his MC isn't overpowered at the start is another plus for me. Another plus is MC not a simp or beta.
The MC's talent is just a D-rank and yet it's too OP. There are also a lot of things that doesn't make sense in this novel. I wouldn't really recommend reading this novel.
Writing quality is quite good. The stability of updates is good too and just to make sure, I checked the profile of author and it seems they have written quite a lot previous to this novel so if you're a new reader, just know this is the real deal. The story has good pacing. It's not perfect (this is obviously dependant on each reader so others might think it has the best pacing this world has ever seen and some might think otherwise, I'm just giving my opinion). Characters are described well and are given roles so they do not feel one dimensional. The only con I would say is the world background which I would right now rate a 2-3 star BUT the author said they are editing the novel so I will choose to believe in them. So if possible author, just add more details to the background to give a more vivid atmosphere. That was the only complaint that I had but everything else was good and I would definitely recommend to others.
I like the characters, they seem nice and interesting and the contrast in peraonalities is fun. Such as when the cashied doesn’t get to clock out and she assumes the universe hates her. The story so far (only 4 chapters) is funny and enjoyable. However, honestly I think the romance is progressing too quickly, and if someone’s going through a hard time it’s less realistic to spill it straight away, you also wouldn’t immediatley gush over someone after being cheated on? Constructive critisism: -most romance novels are better when the romance is at a slower more natural pace, if it’s too fast paced it may seem forced. -Also, for how she spilt her “backstory” of sorts to him, it’d be more realistic if you’d:1. Had her go in either slightly drunk causing her to spill, like she’d gone bar hopping and came here for a drink to clear her head to figure out what to do. 2. Had her go in distraught, him being attracted to her but not liking her yet, offers her a drink since “drinks help you drown your sorrow” and she lets her “backstory” loose after getting a bit tipsy.
Boring.Just plain.The character is a regressor, and instantly becomes OP. Makes people accept him as their lord, gives them OP items. His cheat doesn't seem to have any cooldown or limits either, just insta-upgrade from normal to OP items or classes. MC has no background story or anything, just that he was someone who regressed and was a decent summoner in his last life. No character development at all, MC doesn't have much of a personality either. Also somehow all the "top talents" of the future are conveniently located near him, of course most of which are women. He forces people to accept the harsh truth that the apocalypse is now, and that the world now follows the laws of the jungle, he's not wrong, but the world was literally changed maybe a few hours ago and now he's enforcing jungle laws like it's his life, not surprising since he's a regressor, but annoying. In the end, this is a boring, gary-stu, insta-bs novel, I like apocalypse game like novels a lot, but this is just rubbish. Something that seemed like author shitted out because of some contract quota. Here's some real recommendations for apocalypse like novelsWorld's Apocalypse OnlineKill The Hero (not really apocalypse, but dungeons descend on earth)The Tutorial is too hardEveryone else is a returnee
LOCKED ? No more free this days. I love this platform but men this is very expensive!! I save this because I though this novel gonna free forever but now chapter 40 to the end is locked!! ? PotangInaWalaTalagangForever
This is on of my first reviews if not my first one and I can seriously say I enjoy the novel. Although for a Real review I would say it's around 3.5 stars, I enjoy the premise of the story enough to rate it 5 stars. Also it's pretty unique that he told someone he wasn't the original body's owner. All in all I enjoy the story and it's pretty good
Did anyone find the raw, even with chinese title+author's name and other novel............................................................
I think this story deserve stars just because of the synopsis. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ------------——------------¯_____------__
Yello~ Samuel Lasagna Jackson here to review the SUCC. Remember that word, it's gonna be a internal meme. Anyhow, let's begin MOTHERFUCKERS. I'm gonna base everything of the og times 2.So, expect some cool moments. Expect a lot if comedy. slight and I mean sliiiight bullshittery. and a lot of succ... suc...