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I like it and am looking forward to future chapters. hope author keeps up the good work.
really good, mostly because of the WWI vibes with a cool combat system.
why wouldn't i give my book five stars? you think I'm stupid?
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Love this Book, pls keep writing, but somthing is wrong with the chapters starting at 130, old ones are uploaded agian and again. I NEED more chapters
You know, with all the five-stars reviews that I can get, I believe that at least one, true 1 star would be a nice addition.But on a more serious note, welcome everyone to yet another of Sloth's productions!This time, we are tackling the topic of dungeons. Is the Dungeons Online game just a game? What does the memory of Tom hide? What kind of wonders can you expect in it?Well, just read the first few chapters and you will find out!Romance: Yeah, not sure when thoughAction: A lotPlot: Heck, do you even need to ask?PLOT: most likelyIsekai: Truck-ku aproovedGaming system: Exists but doesn't interrupt the storyShould I read: If you like a good story, then... OF COURSE YOU SHOULD!
Pretty good and interesting. Until it wasnt. In the early chapters we saw the mc being cool headed and making reasonable choices for quicker progression. But then we got to pest. The random curse the mc seemingly knows nothing about despite being some powerful demon the gods had to kill. He doesn't even know how to get rid of a curse. Even worse is the fact the mc becomes extremely childish and cant seem to ignore a insult. He starts gnashing his teeth and whining because of a voice in his head that he should be able to deal with.. but cant for some apparent reason.
For now I find this novel very good: The MC has tragic past we still don't know. The first Arc (until chapter ~30) seems to be the prologue and it was very good.Concerning MC past I like the fact that he seems to have a close relationship in the past with a girl but end up separated cause of some event. It give some new vibes different from other novels in the romance part.Again a good work from you author, I am updated on Death Guns which I find excellent too. I hope you will keep up updating Death Guns and now Crimson Overlord cause I love both of them.
great story with an amazing cliff hanger at the end. no major issues just a couple of occasions when either the characters gender or name would be a wrong
it's great, just some grammar problems I would genuinely fix his grammar for free. seriously, this Nivel has much potential, and writing quality is quite important. ok that's all I have to say
Amazing, your writing style on your story is truly amazing. Even at the first chapter it got me hooked into it, so keep on going at the story, I can't wait.