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I like it has no system.
This good. I don't read new novel usually but I was bored and gave it a try and I don't regret it. I like ruthless mc and he IS RUTHLESS . Don't stop and keep updating. Thnx
So stupid, so stupid I have no more words .he every few chapter's reminds that angle has low birth rate and still didn't understand his value I couldn't read more than 20 chapter's. doesn't understand the consequences of his actions.
missing chapters from 50 tm 54
the previews arent updated?
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The set pace of the story and immersion is good, and the story concept is certainly not the mainstream and unique thus attracting readers right in. The only problem which I seem to find is the abrupt shift in the first-person and third-person narrative but that could be just my opinion may be fair to others. Keep it up Author, never stop dreaming.
This novel is promising. Although a few mistakes can be spotted, but the plot line is fresh and captivating. I hope you work more on this novel and give more attention. Your style sparks up a fire in the reader making me eager for more. Can't wait to read more!
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i will do my best to read this since it is so short, but i did read the first few paragraphs, and i do not know if the writer is writing this for a 3 year old child or a 30 year old ivy league adult. he tries to use intellectually large words that do not seem to be within his normal and domestic vocabulary.... but also realizing it is his first book again i will try and see and either repost or make a new one with more detail.
very good novel!!
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Hey!
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It’s a fun novel with a few things that are a bit off… first why make an RE movie into a game? The games are epic just stick with those (up to 4) second we don’treally need the eight chapter play through of the first game… we’ve seen the movie… Third the mc get like no screen time and his system has no rewards or anything it’s more like an ability… there’s no level progression
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