This is a lovely piece of work. Yes, I'm not so much a fan of stories like this, but I have to give praise to the author. You made me enjoy the story even from the very first chapter.
Although, I got a bit confused from the switching of Povs, and there were a few punctuation and grammatical errors, but with a little editing, this story is bound to flourish.
Great work.
Overall good so far, just want basic info about chapters uploading.
Doesnt have harem ot r15/18 sadly thats the only thing missing.
Its also fast pace huhuhu.
The term evil differs with what the society constitutes as evil and it differs from one society to another. What one considers as good may be bad for another. Personaly i dont find the mc to be " evil " but he sure is stupid as f**k. The mc is protrayed to have millions of years of experience in his previous life. So even if the mc is born with an iq of 20, with accordance to his lifespan he should have considerable amount of intelligence by the time his age hit 1million. Yet the MC in his second life is completely acting without prudence and common sense !!. Patience, wisdom, intelligence, cunningness, disregard of life, prudence, serenity, presence of mind, sense of self are some characteristics that could develop wr to time. The MC had Time, lots of it. Yet he lacks the qualities that corresponds to his claimed "hundred million years of life experience ". Mr.Author, i dont know if my ramblings would hurt you. But, kindly take my review in to consideration when u create a story like this. I dont find many faults except character design.
Feels like a korien Drama ..............
I think I forgot to leave a review previously. Here is the 5 stars
The writing is really good, the characters are decent. There are only 5 chaps currently but a pretty good novel so far.
Nice heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I like this, It was a very Noice Story.............................................................................................................................................
Translation Quality:
Some sentences are hard to read because of how they are translated.
Stability of Updates:
This is one star as I haven't seen how often they will update this story when it goes live.
Story Development:
The story is developing at a decent quality but the pace seems a bit rushed at times.
Character Design:
Very few characters are original and the ones that are all seem to be lacking a quality that makes them human.
World Background:
We all know Warcraft's world background and the author makes a good go at using said background, I would like to know how the author intends to make it their own before I can increase the score.
This story is by far one of the most in depth and best Star Wars si out there I wish there where more fanfic out there like this thank you for writing such a good story
The novel had a tough start but soon smoothen out towards the end. This review is based on the first 40 free chapters. Found two minor spelling errors (no Biggie) and the usage of Clone instead of Instances urks me as a gamer. There doesn't seem to have much storyline depth to it but it's a pleasurable read non-the-less for Tower Defense Fans.
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