Deserves to get picked I'm currently loving itCharacters are good and the plot is currently going at a good pace.There isn't enough chapters to actually judge the book but right now it's great.
Eh Personally I gagree with the guy up top as it does seem to be taking the road of LMGIP(let. Me game in peace)but it makes ah well more sense for me for I felt like let me game in peace was a little all over the place at most at least 300+ chapters and I got bored but I do really hope this gets chosen as it is quite in the. Least interesting than anyother of the books here... Well for me :P
Theres only been a few chapters so far so this is an early review but...Writing Quality: This one was unexpectedly good. The author has a good comman of english and I haven’t spotted any typos or grammatical errors. The sentence structure is well paced and varies from line to line to keep things flowing.Story and character development: The main character has a depth to him, and the plot itself feels realistic and raw. The characters are multifaceted and not just boring stock characters. I really felt the emotion during the appearance of the second creature. (Intentionally Vague to avoid spoilers)World background: Too early tp say much, but what has been revealed so far has been done through more show rather than tell. I love that.Overall, this book has the potential to become a gem. Author, please don’t drop this novel :)
I enjoy the story, and I enjoy the plot. It would be better if you could use the grammar checkers like Grammarly or type in Microsoft Word or Google Docs because they automatically point out the grammatical mistakes. Overall, the story is amazing.
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The only unique thing is the new concept of the system, other things like world background and plot are nothing new and even quite lame to a certain extent, I'm not fond of harem and early romance, so when the mc entangles with women right in the first several chapters, I got turned off instantly. Not my cup of tea.
the book is nice super nice in fact 8 like it if only the could update more Chaters pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee???????????
It's an amazing story, I really like it, but what I have to complain about is TWO FAST PASSES PER CHAPTER??! That's just ridiculous, no matter the story.
This is a book with great potential! I'm waiting for your update!
no just no you have disrespected the memory and character that is itachi uchiha shame on you as a naruto fan I was disappointed and appalled
well for those who are new here, this is not the complete novel. you can find its translation at Twitter. And, about the story, I am in love. I prefer TGCF more than SVSSS or MDZS. The amount of shit xie lian went through, is unbelievable. I legit cried. And the love between HC and XL is soo fucking deep like damnnn. I also love how every character has a story as well. Most of them are tragic. I really feel like forgetting the whole story and reading it again to feel that immense story. Well, all in all, you should give it a try. It's worth it.
Woah!!! a unique genre enters webnovel and I am so excited to encounter more of what will happen next! I think it just needs some modification when it comes to pacing and sentence structure? XDKudos to the author! ?