the written has used a language that is comprehensive. the flow of the story is also smooth, am just eager to follow it up to the end.
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Every great novel starts with a single sentence keep writing and your story will unfold.
It is an interesting story, it has a hook that just drags you into the story like you one with it. Keep up the good work Author and never give up no matter what someone tells you something bad.
Looking forward to this apocalyptic like Novel ?
The storyline is going well. Recommended ❤️
Hello, it's Steel here and it's my debut harem novel. Please if you have any questions or complaints, drop them here and I'm sure to respond to them. These are the additional tags:Yuri - NoNTR - Yes (the Mothers are wives of Eros so yeah)Cultivation - YesNetorare - NoAntihero - YesCunning MC - YesThe novel follows Aeric who is reborn in a fantasy world were romance, desire and powers are entwined. He enters the world with the Celestial Depravity System with is basically a cheat code that gives him a unique Class and Skill, with the Skill, he can claim the abilities of women by inseminating them with his royal seed. But shooting your load into a woman has proven to cause more problems than it has solved, and that also remains the case for Aeric in the world of Erothyria.
It's not for me, not because of the story but because of the way it is told, that is, the narrative is too detailed, literally each phrase or word is followed with a meaning, it is very poetic and that bores me. A shame because I find the premise interesting.
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The end.....
We returned to a port to fix the HMS Hood up for battle when a weird crystal fell from the sky which I had never seen before but it had a slot which fitted into my quantum super computer. I placed it in then began the repair of HMS Hood when I saw a different refit option. The option was labelled space I figured it wouldn't harm to try it and used my hacking skills to activate it the crystal turned into the colours of the UK flag and HMS Hood began its conversion into Space Battlecruiser HMS Hood. The crystal presented a 1 hour countdown which we presumed correctly was how long it would take to refit the ship. Due to this long extent of time we decided to go to the school canteen where I picked up a super delicious cheese and pesto pasta as well as a good old cup of British tea. The rest of the crew then grabbed food from the canteen and subway each enjoying a complimentary cup of tea from me. Mr Ansty then entered the canteen and said he knew who I was but would not tell anyone as he had taught me for so long and didn't care if the rumours were true. I then ordered a tea as a thank you and he provided a pepperoni pizza to show his gratitude and loyalty. The rest of the crew were still unaware of my true identity at this moment but I would have to confront this at some point. I returned to the ship after spending a hour enjoying lunch. The ship looked brand new with a vibrant red base and blue stripes donned above on the sides a sold oak deck with reinforced under armour equip the top and a beautiful original looking infrastructure was on the ship. The 8 15 inch guns remained in dual turrets however had been changed to a sort of phaser weapon which was blue coloured. The turrets also had the great flag of the British Empire painted upon them which filled me with imperialist emotions. However this was not the time for such emotions I had to find Connor McAlister and beat him for his treachery against me.
thanks for the chapter, I could feel this novel will be the one I might love it. <3