keep doing what you are doing it's really appreciate
Can’t lie sincere been providing peak content like Luka playing the way he does especially his hat trick in the UCL like yuck ?
One of the best game like fantasy series
Very interesting. Looking forward to reading more
Great book, although the story line is familiar and the supernatural part of Liam is not even defined clearly... Overall It's a great book Can't wait to see how far it goes.
Keep up the good work! You've done a good job with the series; I see lots of protentional and tons more story to be told with this. Obviously, it has roots with other works like Cote, and Tomodachi Games, but this feels like a whole different beast on its own. I definitely recommend this to others to read if they want a brand new experience in terms of smart MCs.
amazing novel with a cold mc but tbh in certain cases he could be too cold I find some of it a bit too much especially with the way soverick treats his fam but its a amazing check it out
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
Dude after 150 chapter the author just changed his writing style. Its fees like I am reading some ancient text or something. Like how should I say this, it's like this line here ' The Null Estate loomed ahead, an indomitable fortress of heritage and might, carved into the heart of the rugged valley' Its presence exuded an aura of silent authority, an ancient testament to the power and lineage that guarded it, standing steadfast as if to shield against the encroaching shadows cast by recent upheavals.The estate's entrance unfurled like the maw of a slumbering giant.' I mean you could have just said the' null estate' that it feels like he is trying to fill the chapters with unnecessary words to expand them.
What a great development of a the character, it will be even better if he developed more(I'm at chapter 53 currently) I'm waiting for him to be stronger than the ghu province lord, idk why but i felt angry at how he's more domineering than the mc. Some help for peopleNo romance & harem(I'm at chapter 53 so until there it's guaranteed, maybe the author will change)Good grammar Good world building Great character development Now, just read it.
Average of most
"Ha ha ha ha, now give me potion of angry". Dark laughing.