Post 75+ chapter binge review.First, I don't think I've made as many intra chapter comments for one story as I have today. I've been thinking about this and I think that's a reflection of my engagement with a story. And some of these elements which elicit commentary include humor, interesting plot points, and relatable characters. Which is to say that although yes, this is a sports-themed novel with some pretty standard elements (physical/skills growth, tournaments, etc.), and less than perfect editing notwithstanding, this story really has a way of drawing you in as a reader and engaging you.This is self-published work and the author doesn't appear to be a professional. But he has taken one important storytelling tip to heart and that is "Write about what you know". It's so obvious that the author not only has a very passionate and knowledgeable perspective on basketball, but it is clear that many things he is able to write about comes from personal experience.But at the end of the day all of it just comes together with good storytelling - there are interesting characters, moments of levity balanced against thoughtfulness, adequate ******* and release, and a pretty good pace to story development. Either way, I'm engaged and looking forward to following this story for a long time. Mad respect to the author for his efforts.
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please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.
I have stopped webnovel for awhile but this book got me back. Story is hard to judge as at 20 plus chapter mc still have not started the game. The slow build up is nice as it concentrates on the relationship build up rather than op mc gets girl, ***, op wins the world storyline.The nsfw scene is pretty well written and is the main reason i am supporting the writer :)The Low Score i gave is becausenof world background which writer have not gone into yet. High marks for character development.