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Poorly translated. Very bad. So many wrong grammar and whatnot. I stopped immediately.
Bruv why so salty babe ? You good ?
Im totally hooked with the characters of the story.. This is a must read to all who's looking for novel to pass time..
Thank you author
Nice book,the title and everything is captivating
keep it up
Writing quality is 5/5. Update stability is 5/5 Story development is 5/5 Character design is 5/5 World background is 5/5
What more can I say?
Yes I am a serial reviewer. Bite me.
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Im at chapter 46, and it’s pretty interesting. Though I do hope this family bs will mostly clear up soon, as frankly, it isn’t what I’m here to read. It’s definitely unique, and so far extremely well written, but this isn’t “My Journey To Become A Crime Boss”, but “Titan Rising Online: World Breaker”. Either way, great story and a whole lot of potential, but I just hope the story doesn’t go down a emotional rabbit hole, but stays on track.
First impression review!
FL is very mature for her age (as expected in the synopsis.) She's very aware of her surroundings and isn't one to pounce or act without careful thought.
To see her figure out she transmigrated to the book was anti-climactic not just because a lot of books have this plot but also because she was perceptive enough about it, pushing aside questions she might have like how it happened in exchange for survival—especially when she her new character got poisoned. What's the use of lashing out when it could cause you your life?
She also transmigrated to a timeline before the beginning of the novel she read so not everything is figured out for her. I expect to see her try to make it with blind eyes. Then, see how she'd do when she enters the main timeline of the story.
Kudos to Sorahana, of course, my writing deity. I could only hope to be as good as you are. Hoping to be able to be here for this novel every step of the way.
Wow. Another book of Author Mary. So, excited to read it.
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Wow, what a hidden gem! Not only is the world and character building detailed and intriguing, but the writing quality is amazing. The shameless author keeps his update schedule as promised too, novels of this quality are rare on webnovel.
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