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This is a shameless review but this story is like a fine wine and the more you read the more chapter you will want to continue... Trust me, you won’t just love it—you’ll need it.Let me break it down:1-The Action: Battles so intense, you'll feel your pulse race faster than Akira dodging a dungeon boss.2-Humor That Kills ( will be shown way later when he gets his character changing: Literally. Akira’s taunts are so good they might as well be classified as a weapon.3-Heartfelt Moments: Beneath the sass and the battles, this story has an emotional core that hits hard. Akira’s journey isn’t just about revenge—it’s about finding his place in a broken world. 4-The Plot Twists: Think you’ve seen it all? Nope. The surprises in this story will leave your jaw on the floor.
Almost 200 chapters in and less then 10 days have passed. Where do you wanna take this story at this pace?Maybe instead of adding all the action in a single day, spread it out a bit?This has so much potential but you're slowly killing it with unnecessary padding.
The story looks promising i didn’t notice big writing problems but i also didn’t look for them the story i realy found new and i am interested in what the author will do with this story
Good story and a funny protagonist glad she’s not a self righteous person
Why not contracted yet? It's good bro. You dont wanna monetize it.
where are the new chapters? is it dead? if not please reply
Me encantó, desde el comienzo la historia te atrapa y te dejan con ganas de seguir leyendo.
This story is really really captivating ❤️❤️. You really did a great job in this story. The plot twist is really intriguing and awesome. Keep on updating author ❤️❤️❤️
Shameless Author’s review ?This is a story that is worth your attention, dive into the world of fantasy and be thrilled There may be mistakes as the story goes on but the suspense and plot is very vast and interesting Enjoy the stories of The Supreme Writer?
Interesting story, looking forward to more chapters.
This is such a sweet story, and it has been lovely to watch the characters grow together. Overall the whole thing gives a feeling of comfort and home-y-ness that make reading it feel like snuggling up in blankies and sipping some warm milk tea. Definitely read it if you get the chance!
Currently about 60 chapters in and I'm loving it! Each main character has a detailed back story that helps you fall in love with them. I'm happy I finally found a series that has so many chapters already published ❤️?
