SimonRDR
it's ok. it has a lot of flaws. The character development is too forced, I understand the author wanted to give the MC a tragic backstory but making everyone hate him for no reason at all just made it stupid and not realistic. Then all of a sudden he has a sister that came from nowhere. I don't understand why he's so obsessed with rei and Hana. Rei was just kind to him, Hana is his childhood friend was he expecting her to be with him just for that. author really need to develop the characters better
Good so far as chapter 15 so looking forward to more. 101 chapters is too short. Is there not more years for school and soccer play and more challenges to meet? Hoping release pace will be good so neutral rating.
The story is really interesting. Good worldbuilding, at least for the "other" world. And interesting, clever MC. He is getting more and more power tho, and we're at volume 2 right now, so the OP-ness is really starting to show. He has some significant disadvantages too, so it's somewhat balanced. I really liked the first volume. However, the second volume started really slow, with a ton of flashbacks, and time skips. The story speed, and tempo dropped significantly, and now I have buyers remorse for paying for the chapters in the second volume. It feels like filler, to increase word count.
this is an awesome vrmmorpg novel ive read in here! one of my fav so far! i love everything about t! five stars for me! couldn't wait to read more!
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The author trie to make you believe he's original but there are so many stupid thing we see over and over and over that it just left you numb and like "ho, did I really dare to spend 1 stone on this?!".So yeah great disappointment, I'm like 15 chapter after Ellia possession and the author was like "don't worry, it's not like those ****ty novel, i'll be making thing different" but the novel is still like all the other, maybe the world background is less impressive.If you like Cultivation novel you can read it if you have time to lose, if you're new, well go for better cultivation novel if you're neither of those 2 case then just don't read it.One of the biggest disappointment since 2019
A happy ending to Olivia and Darls
Nice story plot, especially love the ml and the brother. Still reading though but I just thought to give a review after the first five chapters....
these book is five stars make it end with Jay Angline and for kids a whole family again
Wow. Best book I’ve ever read on an app like this.
Amazing book!! I couldn't put it down.
Very good story
