the grammar is not upto the mark but development characters is very good and also the power level classification is also good. I hope it will be more interesting in upcoming chapter to watch fights in higher realms
Thanks to the author for explaining that it was indeed intentional to time skip the section I asked about. Only gripe I have is how abrupt and random the time skip was, especially when it spoiled a LOT of story. For those that want to know when this big skip happens, it's the chapter after [Trauma].SPOILER NEXT:The big leap from the MC just surviving an attack, only to suddenly jump to when he's now suddenly in a life or death duel with no clue as to who any of the newly introduced characters are is disorienting. I thought it was intended at first but the amount of information that was lacking was off putting and frustrating to read through to the point where I genuinely thought there were chapters missing. It wasn't like the time skip thing that happened at the start where the MC clicked "NO" and then we got the background up until that foreshadowing point, it was just a straight up skip of what seemed to be 1-2 mini arcs worth of content to read.CONCLUSION:I enjoy this story, but the fact that I have to trudge through a completely new arc and characters I know nothing about and have to remember what their relationships and characteristics are have put me in a dilemma as it started becoming less enjoyable for me. I may try and read again later cause I don't want to make reading what is clearly a well thought out and developed story a chore. I recommend reading in small intervals, or stop if you get confused and take a break.
One of the best novels I've read on wn, and extremely addcting to the point where I always check it the moment I open wn. Everytime I see that it's updated, I literally go over the moon.Writing Quality - Though there are a few grammatical errors, the writing style and words are nothing short of exceptional. Every thing is described nicely and easy to understand. Plus, grammar doesn't matter much these days so you get 5 stars.Stability of Updates - Love that it's updating everyday, but sadly I read too fast to be satisfied. I respect your effort for keeping up everyday! 5 stars!Story Development - A bit cliched but also has originality. Incredibly enjoyable to read, plus I like the small twists every now and then. It also makes me want to know what happens next, getting me more addcted. 5 stars again!Character Design -
should be 1 star all around arthur gave up writing on chapter 47. it's almost a direct rip off from another book named magic academy I have infinite skill points.
More updates. This is simply an excellent novel. It was a little bit early to be giving reviews but this novel is just wonderful. It deserves an oscar awards ?. Excellent
I love the beauty of this book, the background is awesome. I love this kind of plot, the author is doing a great job and I hope he continued his amazing work.
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Can we just take a moment to appreciate how well-written Liu Feng's dialogue is? Because this guy is a villain and I have never hated a fictional character's voice so much in my life. 'Even if you die, you'll die in the fields. If you delay my achievements, I'll skin every last one of you alive.' That's not just villain dialogue. That's the dialogue of a man who has convinced himself he's right. He's not cackling. He's not being theatrical. He's just... stating facts from his twisted perspective. And that's what makes it so viscerally annoying. He genuinely believes the Shen family's suffering is 'their own fault.' And then there's Shen Zhinian, who has this incredible range in her dialogue. With her brother, she's soft — 'Brother.' Just that. With Liu Feng, she's ice — 'If you don't believe me, feel free to test it.' With her grandmother, she's tender but steady. With Su Yuning, she's warm without being sappy. Each voice is distinct and the author never lets them blur together. The line that stuck with me the most though is Shen Congzhao's vow: 'When Zhao'er grows up, I'll definitely take you away from here.' He's a child. Ten years old. And he's already thinking about carrying his entire family on his back. The dialogue is so simple but it carries so much weight because of who's saying it. And Old Madam Shen's voice — 'Our Shen family has always done good deeds and accumulated virtue—Heaven wouldn't treat us so harshly.' That's the voice of someone who's trying to hold onto hope even when everything around her says it's foolish. You can hear the cracks in it. The author doesn't need to tell us she's desperate — it's in the dialogue itself. The Su brothers' argument about the root was also surprisingly natural. 'What's yours? It's clearly mine.' That's not dialogue from a novel, that's dialogue from real life. Kids fighting over food in a famine. It felt observed, not invented.
Keep on writing the more you write the more you will look like a creator hahah I like the novel. I love this kind of novels hahaahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhaahhahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahaahhahahahhahahahahhahahahhahah
why will his wife kill him and the system will not warn himwhy can't he get revenge fast
THE BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD!!! IT DOES NEED SOME IMPROVEMENTS BUT ITS STILL A GOOD BOOK!! JUST DONT STOP WRITING THIS PLZ!!! I LIKE IT AND WANT TO SEE IT TO THE END AND IF U CAN CAN U PUT OUT MORE CHAPTERS A WEEK PLEASE!!!??
Sounds sloppy and not well thought out. It sounds nice to have the full support of digital phone services in an ancient world, but that just seems distracting and then inconvenient to get invested into.