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i find the story interesting, i identify it with several games, i hope for more chapters :3
try writing a better summary as the current one is too vague and uninteresting ..
First of all it's a book with a really good plot. Worth the read and I have high expectations regarding it. One of the good revenge stories. 1) writing quality The writer progresses as they continue to write and it's very evident moreover, the chaps which need improvement are getting edited so Kudos to the author. 2) story development The author knows what they are doing. It has a good pacing and honestly, characters are well developed so the story has a good progress. 3) updating stabilityA keyboard breaking author (u2060u2060╹u2060▽u2060╹u2060u2060)4) world background Since it is contemporary with a bit of fantasy it doesn't really have much to offer but, since it is based on modern world, the author has put lots of characters interaction. Love that. Over all, an improvement in writing quality and some minor grammar would make the author a solid 5/5 but since there are still room for improvement a 4/5 for now! (u2060u2060ꈍu2060ᴗu2060ꈍu2060)Hope to see more improvement and more progress!! All the best!
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
This book is very much interesting especially from the beginning of the third chapter. There are many adventures and many things for humanity to discover. I think a lot of people will like this story. For a spoiler, an Alien race is going to b introduced in the upcoming part of the story.
Even though you said this is ur first work I am at a loss because this is so good. Hope the author to keep going and give these lovely readers morr and more. lots of love ❤️
This review is just based on the first 5 chapters I just think the pace of this story is to fast with not enough detail. The reading isn't capturing enough.
Its medicore.Mc iritate me so much ...Autor make him look weak. And he was.. but all the time he lose battle and when he was about to die his hiden power destroy enemy.... And his charakter...He was bullied and when he got magic he new guy he forget past and accept everything like normal magic ok new guys ok mehhh....He complett another person..
I've enjoyed every minute i spent reading this novel. Good balance of world building, character development, serious plot, and humor. Lots of humor. A but tongue in cheek sometimes, but definitely enjoyable.
Story trash. Super geniuses gets absolute protection from the heavens, they can't be hurt. That already makes me not want to read this. Characters trash. MC's servants are really simple, I feel like they have only one line "MC is trash" that is it. I don't think I noticed anything else about them. This novel feels really bland, there is nothing that makes it unique. I totally wouldn't read this any more.
Amazing story. Love the tranmigration female lead theme. Especially main character fluffy romance. But why must they gain their memory it givesbaeayvall the mystery oh well love the different pov anyway.