Great so far. It's just that the language makes me feel uneasy somehow. With all the cursing haha. It does not suit the FL and the characters at all ?
So first off, the writing quality is fine, there is not too much problem with that, the updating quality is very good, tough the size of each chapter is small, so I think you should publish 1 chapter out of two or three small ones. The story development, as for now nothing has had really happened, the protagonist just stayed in his village training and writing, so I expect a quick development of it's quality, what you must do is not make it really fast forward nor too slow, just find the right amount, try get our interest with something like a tension.About the characters names now, don't just put a bit of every anime and make it a story, for example I don't think you should have named the protagonist Roronoa Zoro, it's just sound like someone who is obsessed with that character, same for Artoria, besides what are the chances of a Japanese to be named (with both the family name and the first name) like someone from Europe or Mexico.Then about the paragraph's space, don't make a huge thing, it's very easy to get lost.Finally about the world background, very poor for now so you should really work it from now on.
I have read till 185 on scribble hub, I like it but its too slow and I would prefer if the harem development would be fast, it is taking too long.
One of the few trial novels I find interesting recently..................................................................... . ............
Like the other review states, the book is enjoyable so far, well written and interesting development. The authors other book ‘the bored immortal’ is still good after 500+ chapters so I have high hopes for this book. Definitely recommend it!
MC's extreme distrust is getting on my nerves so much I want to kill him, he's putting off everything even strength just because he doesn't trust system. bro you will die first before the system does anything to you if you keep on being so dumb. Secondly, interactions with characters arent really logical, it seems quite forced. they don't really think into things. Harold is too cowardly for the first half, but good thing he still tried to save his wife. Thirdly, too much fights and all of them are very long, I'm now around 30 chapters and the whole thing is just fighting and nothing else, even adventure is very short and plain, no relaxation at all, it's as if I'm watching a 10 hours long Naruto fights compilation. we can't be so tense the whole few hundred chapters, that's not novel, that's torture.Fourthly, MC is too bloodthirsty and doesn't think about using terrains to fight, he also attacks someone that he knows could kill him without even talking it out, just say that you want to end things peacefully, u haven't even killed anyone from each side yet.Fifthly, some forced plots are too obvious, should think of lengthening the plot and adding more points instead of directly going into it and forcing everything.sixth, this is just my preference. it's fine if you want to add mystery and all that, but at least let us know basic things gradually and not just put fights without going into mysteries.
Bruh let me just put it in a way you'll understand..... if you haven't read this then you don't enjoy life. One of the BEST nove on this app. 1) no Bullsh#t like weak to strong mc 2) not a beta 3) not a pervert whose goal is to capture women like Pokemon 4) well developed plot to the point HE SHOULD BE WORKING ON COMICS!!! 5) a PERFECT story for those who don't like op mc form the start-- Though I seriously still don't understand why people don't like a op mc-- but regardless a PERFECT reason why he can't so readily destroy the universe ### I won't spoil the reason but I SWEAR TO GOD it is perfection#####
Finally finished this until chapter 1315 and I have to say that I am not disappointed.First, there is NO HAREM. A lot of girls like the MC but his heart has remained on one girl-Chu Qingcheng up until the end. His love for her is unconditional and different from his love for Ning'er or any feeling he has for any other female character. I am really happy about that since I absolutely can't stand harems.Second, I keep feeling that this author has achieved the dao and I have somehow become enlightened after reading this book. The author's thoughts are very profound and the book is very well thought out.Overall, I am sure that I will reread this book many times in the future.Thank you author for your hard work.
You limit the abilities of the mc. Like wtf, why did you even do that?? He is ridiculously strong but you slowed down his growth in game by 90%. You didn't even spare his experience acquisition. You made one of the richest person on the planet mc's slave but you can't even make the mc ride a care to school?? Creativeness man. Do you know that word? Be creative but don't exaggerate it.Dropping it.
Project B-S stands for BullShit ! this alone deserved 5 stars! I wonder if it will be censored................................................
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This story was great the plot and specially it's characters. And for me, I really like it so much that I will recommend it to others for them to read. I'm not being bias here, it just that it get to my heart and my mind. I wish you will give us some wonderful work in the future. Thank you!!! I really love it. Fantastic and magnificent, I think this words can describe how perfect your story is. Even though that I'm more on, in an action story with a touch of fantasy, I really really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable, also I really like it, thank so much.