Fr the *ss virginity being taken was too much
where can i find better translation?
because the translation in here is soo bad.
Ch 13 - lmao this shamelessness knows no bounds
If you’re here for the ship I don’t recommend reading this.
I can't help it chap 68*Jiao ma ma
pls fix the synopsis it's very messy not very helpful in telling about the story
It's totally amazing....luv this book???????????
I am the type of reader that only reads the first chapter or so then calls quits so my reviews may be a bit lazy but you got me to reach the second chapter just by mc's comedy so I approve. I know writing and stuff takes extensive planning and it can be a tiring chore really. For me I like stuff straight to the point so if I were to write a novel it would have story and world building but maybe missing bits of process of explanation in logic. All I see in first chapters is that authors do like 33 paragraphs but a lot of them are just written in 2 lines with good spacing. I am digressing... Anyway you could make it big as an author you are able to overcome your hurdle of consistency!
I was enjoying this until chapter 16. I only got to chapter 16 because i feel it was mislabeled and should include tragedy. everything else seems good and if you like that sort of thing then I'm sure you'll enjoy this. Unfortunately I find that unnecessary tragedy ruins my enjoyment of novels. stress and strife are needed but tragic encounters solely to make the mc understand how strong people are is not my cup of tea.
To author Devil_Paragon,This is the 2nd book that I just finished reading. I really like it, the plot, the character design and development, all the works in this book captures me just like your first one.I know your having financial difficulties right now as well as I am too. I just hope that you can finished this story for us your avid readers.I am going to read your 3rd book now even if it is not yet finished because I know in the future you will complete it all.Thank you and more power.
It is a really great story, way deeper than what you could expect at first ! I'm kind of disapointed that we don't know that much about the other characters of the story, aside from Zombie and Cranberry... but, I feel like it is coming ! Also, I find it hard to imagine this world being the set up for an otome game (I don't play those king of games but don't they usually happen in schools so that all the capture targets can be gathered in the same place more easily ?). Every other aspects of this novel are just incredible especially how well written the relation between the two mc is ! And, I'm so affraid for Zombie ! it is clear that the role he has now isn't what was meant for him and it will have lots of consequences on his personality as there is a lot of clue that can let you believe that ! This novel should have at least 1million readers and it is shocking to see that other novels that are way worse than this one have more readers... It makes me a bit sad...
I really like this story and even I learned a lot. Good job author. Please keep writing and continue the work. I love your work soooooooooooooo much