Absolutely terrible story dude doesn’t even start cultivating in a cultivation novel until chapter 50 something Author makes the MC dumb and he litterly acts like a 5 year old. Author gives characters power that they shouldn’t even have with there status and honestly doesn’t explain have the **** that goes on if you read this you will lose brain cells I tried to read through it but it’s soo bad don’t do what I did and continue on
This is one of the few novels I've consistently read since I found out about it and is one of the best crafted stories I've ever found. I would highly recommend this to anyone who is interested in a cultivation novel and if you like this genre I doubt you'll regret reading it.
if u have nothing to read then I guess u could read this to pass some time or relieve your boredom
?????Thats my take for this novel, just 28 chapters and i’m sleepy af, so boring, so far it feels like watching boring drama that only talk talk and talk
Website : qidian chinaViews : 3.25millionRating : 9.4(974)(highest I ever saw)Chapters : 252Status : ongoingRank : 8Word count : 770thousandauthor level : platinumNo of works : 2Previous work : ancient godly monarchIt's an ongoing popular novel so stats change from time to time. Guys I just checked qidian side but ratings in qidian changed for almost every novel, so I dunno if you should believe this rating. Also ratings on my other reviews are before ratings changed, so don't blame me if you see high ratings in qidian and low ratings in my stats. Even a novel with 7.6 rating got changed to 8.8 rating, I dunno what qidian is trying to do.
The story is good till first 700 chapters.In the baltimore arc things start to become illogical and unbelievable. It looks like the author either delegated this to a 10 year old or to an AI at this point.Then the story completely loses the core plotline and key characters are vanished.The key premise of the story of a self made man is replaced by the main hero going full super saayan Goku.After this fiasco continues for around 200 chapters, the author tries to correct course by using a plot device.But even after bringing back the story to earth, it drags on and on. One villain of a city level takes 500 chapters to be defeated. The twists and turns become illogical and key characters behave completely out of character.This attempt of creating "shocking suspenses" do not entertain and only indicate that the author has lost control of the plot.My advise will be to use a plot device to reverse baltimore and start from scratch there sticking to the core messaging
Sigh~~ It’s a shame that I have to drop this novel already. The Mc childishness its beyond my capability to endure reading, he’s too impulsive, short-sighted and hot tempered. Well I understand that I shouldn’t expect much from a poor farmer, but still if he was just a bit more mature and could use his brain a bit. Although the Mc from cultivation chat group wasn’t some super OP guy with 500 IQ he was at least more mature, respectful, thoughtful, and humble, he didn’t try to fawn over beautyful woman with some cringy praises either, cause I ****** personaly dislike such man that get all drooly in front of a girl which look pahtetic in my eyes, well at least he doesn’t look at other women when he has a Gf which left me with a good impression, I don’t know what happens further in the novel though....well anyway have fun
It's so wrong of you to have a novel that could be so much better held back by grammar issues. The story is there, the character is there, but the last of the big three THE GRAMMAR is no where to be found. I can get past the dialogue issue, but you just can't throw commas at a run-on and expect that to solve it. It has gotten to the point that I'm wondering if you read over what you write. At one point in the Novel you even call the MC a young woman (specifically ch.35). I've tried pretty hard to read this novel, but the mistakes are too glaring to let slide. Even when I skimmed through I was noticing mistakes. Without an editor I feel I'm being pretty lenient giving it this score. If you are serious about this novel you should really consider working with someone to fix the mistakes.
its a very good novel but the only problem i have is the super slow story like from chapter 200 to 300 only a few days have passed...................................
Holy hell, if you are wanting to read this, you better bring some bleach for your eyes because the editor did not bother to even revise all the chapters with so many typos and mistakes.
very interesting!
when is the next update?