its like a kid going into hyperactive mode because he ate too many sweets the story is interesting but the emoticons are really hard on the eyes like really, really , really annoying!! , good luck with the writing but just please turn it down a bit on emojis and don't jump from one thing to another rapidly just take it slow (the p.o.v I mean) focus on one thing at a time
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This is a good story, but the author needs to take note of improper tense usage and an awkward word choice. However, the author is able to paint such a vivid picture with his/her/their words that I felt very drawn into the story. Keep it up, author!
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Its a good story. I personally like the gamer and the MCs stories the most. All the other plots seem to be pushing LGBT views down my throat though. Like one story arc happens then we switch over to the MC and get his take on the surprise reveal of the gay couple and the trans person. Where he plays the straight white male, and then all of a sudden his female assistant (which was purposely made to be more competent than him) starts making excuses for her candidates. Ending with the MC being subtly manipulate into changing his straight views on the sexes and into this female leads more gender neutral ones. At this point I dropped the story. I didn't want to read something where there isn't a single person I can relate to. And that the only straight male (MC), was only created to play the fool in this story. The constant POV switches didn't help either.
My first story here , So far I can see this story have the potantial the be one of good stories here so I gave upvotes thasdasdasdasdasdasd
Finally a book that's well written on here. I've actually registered just to show my support for this one. Keep writing, want more!The characters are great, especially love the two zombie sidekicks, and it's about time someone took the side of evil!P.Oh, and 'Deceased and desist?' classic.
Well, let me make a brief comment on what I think of this novel.The beginning is quite average, the MC is quite annoying, the dialogues between characters seem a bit strange and the presented world is typical for this kind of story.However, over time and in subsequent chapters, many of these elements are clearly improving. We have some development of the MC, the relations between him and one of the main female characters are presented in a good way and they develop all the time. As these are the most important elements in the novel for me, I am glad that the author pays attention to them. Additionally, a big plus from me for the MC for his taste in women. The main accusation I can have about the history is the fact that MC is really too OP. I prefer when the power of the main character is more balanced and side characters are able to compete with him.Generally I may be wrong but it seems to me that this is the beginning of the author's adventure with writing and you can see it. Nevertheless, I highly recommend following the story because I think it can only get better with time.
Wonderful story... I'm impressed... please hurry up and write more chapters.... can't wait...the author has a great potential to be a renown writer...kudos...keep it up
I quite like this book. the main character is quite different from many of the authors other main characters and still to an extent past the beginning behaves like a spoiled young master which I like. where this novel fails a little is while the main character is very dimensional and fleshed out the secondary characters are flat and have little dimension. they don't really add much to the story and I don't really care about them as much as I would like. though I will applaud the author for adding a gay couple in to the novel. ?
a story about a game addict who destroyed his life for the game yet never won a tournament despite being a proplayer. He is randomly given a second chance and spends the first 20 chapters acting like he is going to give up the game only to act like the addict he is and get drawn back into it by what seems to be equally obsessed background characters.