Really love how the fights were written. It's clear and well described. It's not confusing. Great first chapter. Keep up the good work. I’m sure we’ll find out more about the world soon enough. Only complaint, the book cover and the story feels like it didn't match that well
a very interesting and fun story, but will there be a loving couple? ..........................................................................................................................................
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Fights in this are like in Kung fu movies, MC fights 30 enemies of same cultivation and they just stand there and get killed by MC while all he gets is a couple cuts. It’s too exaggerated but fine, I can ignore it cause he fouGht beasts in the forest for 1 year so he got super combat sense now and everybody else never fought before in their life.?????Cartoonish Brain dead enemies and fellow disciples who mock him for being weak after casually slapping a guy with higher cultivation to near death. Everybody but MC is as smart as a child.Characters are so cliche it hurts, fatty friend and ice cold beauty who is only nice to MC. Monkey is cool I guess.Plot armor power ups that just fall on MCs head from nowhere, the woman at the start, fine that’s his ‘cheat’, but I can’t help but roll my eyes when an ancient cultivator who’s been fighting poison for 5000 years saves MC out of sure death then gives him all his possessions and asks nothing of him in return. No bring my corpse back to my sect, or spread my ashes in my village. It’s like his sole existence was to drop off treasures for the MC then die to his poison.Not good but not that bad either, it can still be entertaining but it’s nothing special.???
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