Zoro10271
From the start I could see high quality writing. It’s also quite enjoyable and immersive providing a nice contrast between the sad start. I also felt that connection with the mc so I can tell it’s good. I also very much enjoy well executed sports/showbiz/music works so keep it up.
Im really proud of you my fellow filipino. seeing you here is just amazing!Even though your work somewhat resembled shadow hack, you gave it a good twist and make this story a sci-fi like.keep up the good work brother!
I love the world and system, the story is nteresting but it feels like the is not progressing much
I love this novel so much. it is very fun to read.
Interesting.
interesting concept will you be eventually going with Yu-Gi-Oh or card fight vanguard concept in the future ?
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all due respect for your work but it sounds super cringe i can't even complete the third chapter
Coooool , waiting soon for next
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
kesalahpahaman tiap karakter tentang cale ?, yang cuma pengen hidup santai tp malah jadi.....
"FAKE GEAR"Issei said as he pulled out the sacred gear in the form of a purple orb. Saji's eyes then became lifeless and his body became limp but his heart still continued to beat.
