Zoro10271
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this is a masterpiece, ngl! The descriptions are not only immersive and vivid for being well structured, but also for being poetic. I also enjoy the interaction between the characters early on, which made me laugh at a point. well, nothing has pros without cons. in the prologue, a lot of things were introduced by the author which makes things a little bit vague. but, anyways, I really enjoyed it. it's worth a lifetime commitment, fr.
I am a writer so I am giving a 5 star review but pls tell me what you think about it , I am going to add magic ( shastra Vidya , etc.) according to indian legend
Goddam ! This Novel is too Awesome, Author Keep Up the Good Work ?My only suggestion to Author is to increase the Rewards of Harry whenever he conquers a women.
Anticipating more chapters amigo. Keep up the good work?
This isn't wroth the time to read. Each chapter is just word count, it repeatedly states the same thing over an over, around 3-4 times using different words or phrases to say the same thing. This is obviously chatgpt. After chapter 13 you got to pay for the rest, it should be at least chapter 40 like normal on this site. Plot is so slow that it takes an entire conversation into a couple chapters to finish while saying the same thing 3 or 4 times. MC is dull an dumb, while having no good qualities. Also it's written as China is best patriotic. Don't read.
Hey! it's me golden cat. i am just a humble newbie who likes to tell a story. This story might not be written in the best way possible but i am simply someone who tries thier best. So thank you for reading this novel and please guide me for improvements. THANK YOU !!
love the bookmore chapters papa author
Good plot and good storyline indeed. I like the way the dialogue flows so well and so naturally. I did notice some grammatical errors here and there. But overall, this is a good story and I love it!❤ Would be back to read moree when new chapters come out.
Good story but could be better but the mc is not using his power like the fact that he can gain one skill per day or do to the other dimension he have to see if everything is good or the fact why stop him to create other race why it the situation that create race and him who think what he don’t have and maybe see if he can do other thing whith his system and literally the fact that he know an oracle but guy don’t use it NOOOOO he just skip it there is too much too speak but I think you understand now Author I like the concept but your mc don’t use it he is passive
Great intriguing and very very interesting
I will rate this 5 stars because I like NTR .This is one of the best NTR novel out there, the s*x scene is very good detailed.
