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Errors all over the place and even a Name change at Chapter 20
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Translation quality: 8/10
I had previously reed it on [MTL] however, now reading it by a human translator it's really a way more excellent.
Moreover you have incredible translation ability, suggesting you to become a official [Translator] on webnovel.
This will be considered as plagiarism even, mostly u will not receive a contract.
This is ridden with clichés, the writing is unbelievably bad, the translation is garbage…
If you have half a brain, you'll be wanting it excised as soon as possible so as to stop the pain caused by the MC "reflexion" and his actions, as well as the weird "logic" used by the author.
Hard pass despite the interesting premise and absence of the most egregious themes recently seen in Webnovel selection.
World building takes time and effort, something the author clearly did not want to do.
If there was a negative star rating for totally failing as an author this one would deserve it.
Honestly this isn't even that bad
BUT
The MC is a transmigrator who started his second life at age 5, in a modern world 99% similar to his old one and he is still a dead beat nobody until the cheat arrives. There are even the same or very similar companies and the same market crashes.
I am sorry, but why is the MC still so low, I mean, if you had the education of even just a high school student at age 5 why can't you achieve something with your life. There are literally hundreds of scholarships offered to young people with such potential, just choose a field and take one, it is not like you have to pay that money back if you fail later on.
Or invest your pocket change in krypto currency.
This novel has 4 major flaws:
1 It says the MC has transmigrated but does not take that into account except to steal stupid business ideas from the other world.
2 The MC has literally no character development from age 5 to start of this novel. It is like he has just appeared in that world instead of living there for years.
3 The MC is at most avarage IQ and very low EQ, even after 2 lifetimes. He is stagnant and not suitable for active management. Picking a random noob from the street would have been more interesting.
4 Everything about business and management is just hand waved away, if it doesn't serve the authors vision. This story is meant to be realistic but in truth is badly disguised wish fulfillment.
I feel like would have enjoyed it more if it was written like a normal Novel and not something from the 80's, why exactly are you trying to complicate simple sentences with huge grammars, it's so off putting and annoying, couldn't focus at all.
For game that claimed 100% realism, it's not realistic at all. To move you need agility, to wield weapon you need strength. To learn skill you need int. It's impossible for all stat to 0. You need minimum point for caracter to work. When you dump all points to def it's like you become statue. You have hard Rock skin but can't move
The novel is about a NPC (our MC) who is named NPC69 (nice) as a troll made by the devs. He is a guiding NPC who gives the player main quests/side quests but also secretly the secret boss (After demon lord is beat, he reveals himself as a boss all along and kills the player) . We follow him as he is a massive troll to players on purpose after giving up on doing his job properly after going through the instance thousands of times. The comedy is quite good and the plot is refreshing, the author has touched on ideas that have never been used in other novels which you need to read to find out. This novel is honestly great and has me laughing, the characters feel real, and honestly its an amusing read. I usually don't read novels with less than 200 chapters, but this one is my exception. I'm willing to wait for updates for this. The only issue is slight grammar issues, but they are rare and barely noticeable. 5 stars great novel, never drop or i will find the location you live at author and great grandmanap you.
Although there are only a few chapters so far the premise is great. I love stories involving the occult so hopefully it develops well. Keep up the good work!
It's kinda like Monster Musume(?), but more mature and solve certain issue with interspecies relationship. It's quite enjoyable and wholesome at point. There are some nice fan services involved, what more do you want? Read it and enjoy.