Great story, this novel is within my top 5.
Out of the tens of novels I read on this platform, this is top 1.
Good luck and cheers author, I really wish to see a full/completed novel of this quality.
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Had to get very an honest review her and I have to say, this work has a lot of potential. Interesting storyline, a nice and MC and a lot more. Though I feel it could be better, for an original story it is already amazing.
This is a work of real high quality. The chapters are long but cover a whole lot of ground and incorporate some excellent characters and world building. The pacing is spot on and grips the reader right from the opening chapter. Prose is colorful, original and flows really well. You can tell the work has undergone some edits as typos are almost non-existent and the sentences are structured really well. The story is still developing at the stage I am up to, but I am certainly hooked at this point and will continue with this one till the end. Top quality entertainment. A really solid novel!
The story progression builds on classic 'Divine powers' system. And the setting of the main character is done pretty soon into the chapters.There are a few grammatical errors which break immersion of reading a bit, but other than that it is a promising story.
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are the 5 star reviews here bought by the author? or just botsthis fanfic is so bad, it's like an unfinished script writing quality 1 star- i suggest using grammarly author, if you want to better the quality of it story development 1 star- just a copy paste of canon, only difference is the mc gets additional abilities for doing easy taskscharacter design 1 star- the author wrote the mc as a dollar store Saitama, rest is 4 stars
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It is state propaganda in disguise. It doesn't even reach the level of passive nationalism. There's the space toss again. An update or curiosity? Let's go out of curiosity: Brazil released banned pesticides in Europe and the United States and we sell food to these countries, so they banned poison and continue to import poisoned food. Isn't it hilarious?
MC is a boy not a girl , don’t believe in cover pictures. story will be this and that and this without any logic and sensehe will be using chantless magic every where in public . everywhere , every single time ?. ( nobody can do that in this world so far . and he is not OP. )even if he can win fights with strengthening himself . he will use many elements and chantless magic. even if it is a fights with little girl. or random bandits. in this world only few people can use magic and they can only use a single element most of time.he is using ice magic , that is very versatile. but our dumb MC is unique if someone ask him to bring firewood over there , he will use CHANTLESS BLUE FLAMES. there is no need for world background because we all know how the magic world works
Reviewing at around chapter 275:I have conflicted feeling about this.the beginning was not too good in my opinion because the author went the extra mile with the drawbacks on the mc, imposing 4~5 handicaps.Then it turned out to be great with many things addressed and an excellent pace until around the mid hundred chapters, I was surprised by how good this turned out to be and was enjoying the story A LOT. afterwards I feel like it went downhill after the tournament arc. it's moving at a snail pace where there was no progress with the mc character for a hundred chapters (think about it, mc moved from lvl 0 to lvl 42 in less than 200 chapters then suddenly you have to grind a hundred chapters, one third of the story, where the mc lvl stagnates. To me that's killing the story with bad pace and not enjoyable one bit).Now to be fair, the story is about "kingdom building" since the title is about the base he is growing, so I would not complain that a lot of story time is spent on growing his forces, but the contrast in the pacing was too obvious. spending hundreds of chapters in events that take few months of story time is a mistake to me, especially when those events are not Central to plot AND the story is in early stages.I will probably come back to this afterwards but I am dreading the grind if the plot slows down as much as it did between lvl 42 to lvl 43.